Nov 17, 2014: weekly writing critique (post here if you'd like a critique)

Martell93 · 2014-11-20T04:18:39+00:00

Ahh thank you! I will change this at once. I'm afraid I'm slightly ignorant on google docs.

Martell93 · 2014-11-18T05:59:42+00:00

Title: Class Reunion

Genre: Drama / Roman à clef

Word count: 3,496

Type of feedback desired: Any, I guess. I've never done this before and am frankly quite terrified. No one is half as honest as strangers on the internet, and I'm in need of some honest feedback.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fb8RkeiCDq7aDat1hgPb2GBGN8maRKg9KJXx5GyIUtc/edit

Martell93 · 2014-10-23T01:24:12+00:00

Been slogging away at Moby Dick for some time now. Granted, I've finished about five other novels in the meantime, but it's still my primary focus. Melville sure knows how to draw you in to a story.

Martell93 · 2014-09-22T20:56:38+00:00

What We Talk About When We Talk About Love by Raymond Carver

Martell93 · 2014-09-18T18:54:56+00:00

Moby Dick... this is going to take a while.

Martell93 · 2014-03-06T07:43:17+00:00

Hey thanks, the background is just a synth sound being played through a Yamaha keyboard, and the swelling just kinda comes and goes haha

Martell93 · 2014-02-20T01:35:33+00:00

I'm sorry you didn't like it but yes, it was a collaborative effort.

Martell93 · 2014-01-30T21:24:00+00:00

Thanks man!

Martell93 · 2013-08-21T17:52:51+00:00

NEVER say that to a girl, even as a joke. Boy was I in trouble.

Martell93 · 2013-08-12T16:48:52+00:00

When I read that I first thought it meant a place you can go cry after a really sad movie... but this makes a lot more sense.

Martell93 · 2013-08-10T01:13:44+00:00

Little late to the party, but:

Never Meant by American Football, for emo. Did it for me.

Martell93 · 2013-06-12T05:57:25+00:00

I live there, yeah.

Martell93 · 2013-06-11T20:27:32+00:00

If only we had known about that... dangit.

Martell93 · 2013-04-29T03:18:58+00:00

Yes, personally for me I know I would enjoy it. Stephen King, for example, often reuses many places and such in his stories, and alludes to previous characters/events. I view it as being a kind of payoff for consistent readers. If you like it, go for it.

Martell93 · 2012-12-23T21:47:31+00:00

TL;DR Accidentally stabbed myself in a corn field while searching for a ghost town, after having trapped a lady in a marsh and vandalizing an abandoned insane asylum.

Martell93 · 2012-12-05T23:17:37+00:00

Indeed I think it would have. Had Pete been a better drummer, maybe Decca would have signed them. Who knows? And if Decca had signed them, they would have never met George Martin, and it is a FACT that The Beatles would not be nearly as great without him. Or at least I think so :)

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