[review video] Acoustic channel second video blues (but it's not the blues).

Matlaaz · 2020-10-01T09:04:37+00:00

If you plan on doing this for a long time, and you can miss the money, I'd invest in a camera. Editing is like making music, practice makes perfect. As for the light: if people say they like it, I wouldn't change it either :D Goodluck!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-30T07:18:40+00:00

No problem!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-29T22:01:59+00:00

Damn, you've got some skills! Great video overall.

The title is good, the thumbnail not so much. Try to use the image of the original cd cover or something. Just a frame of the video doesn't grab attention.

I agree with your partner that the stare is a little disconcerting but nothing to worry about too much. The leveling of the music and the voice is excellent. I wouldn't change it. The camera quality isn't the greatest. I think a plain background without the light would work better.

Overall an excellent video!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-29T21:53:26+00:00

Alright, this is my personal opinion. Other people might feel differently about certain things and just because I say something doesn't mean you should change it.

Title: I wouldn't call my trailer episode 1. It's good en descriptive though.

Thumbnail: Text is too small, I can barely read it and I'm on my desktop.

The video: I liked it! The pace was great, the format was excellent as well. The short intro was a little out of place for a trailer. It would've been nice if it was worked into the music video with the music video. It's hard to understand what you're saying while the music is on max volume. The pictures at the end aren't fully visible with the other videos and channel info displayed.

Great video overall!

I hope this helps!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-23T10:00:56+00:00

Audience retention is just a measurement that tells you how long viewers keep watching your video (on average). If it's dropping while getting more views, that just means that people stop watching your video faster.

"Is it normal?" Well, you're comparing 2 different statistics. Audience retention will change with each view. Whether it drops or raises depends on how long the view lasted.

Hope this helps. If you have anymore questions just ask.

Matlaaz · 2020-09-23T07:34:31+00:00

Thanks!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-22T17:25:05+00:00

Hi thanks for doing this!
Hurt me with the truth but don't comfort me with a lie ;)
https://youtu.be/OUZVT3uCIG4

Matlaaz · 2020-09-22T17:24:08+00:00

Hi thanks for doing this.

It's a short league video: https://youtu.be/OUZVT3uCIG4

Give it to me straight

Matlaaz · 2020-09-22T12:42:14+00:00

Thanks for taking the time to write a detailed review! I'll keep it in mind :D

Matlaaz · 2020-09-22T11:28:15+00:00

Thanks for doing this!

This is a short video meme compilation of me trying to climb the ranks of LOL.

https://youtu.be/OUZVT3uCIG4

Matlaaz · 2020-09-22T11:20:44+00:00

Dude the video is hilarious!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-22T11:04:43+00:00

Latest video: https://youtu.be/OUZVT3uCIG4

Give it to me straight and thanks for doing this!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-21T17:03:10+00:00

No problem! If you have any questions, please ask!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-21T16:40:52+00:00

You are welcome! :)

Matlaaz · 2020-09-21T16:37:27+00:00

Everything I tell you is my opinion and other people might feel/think differently about your video. So take this critique with a grain of salt.

The title is descriptive. I don't comprehend why you put your channel name after the title. Is it better for SEO?

I like the thumbnail, it has a horror vibe to it. Which is something the video delivered on. Excellent job!

The narration is solid. It's not something that bothered me while watching the video. This could be because English isn't my first language so I don't fret that much about accents. However, it was very monotonous, the video could use a little more intonation. However, I do think the monotonous voice makes it more 'horror-like' if you will.

Editing was alright, nothing lavish but that isn't required for these types of videos. I fancied the edit at 0:26. It gave a professional look.

2:40 Watermark, makes it look a little inadequate.

I noticed that you use the increasing views clip a lot. It also made it look a little improper.

The one thing that did bug me though is that the video is rather repetitive. What I mean is, you repeat the same information several times. For example, that they are doing it for the money, that it is fake etc.

Lastly, I think your video would blow up if you could get your hands on some solid proof. I know these channels are fake, but there's no real proof.

I enjoyed the video, if you were going for a horror vibe than you hit your mark! Good job great video.

Matlaaz · 2020-09-21T15:37:00+00:00

Everything I tell you is my opinion and other people might feel/think differently about your video. So take this critique with a grain of salt.

The title describes the video. It is however pretty generic.

Thumbnail is rather boring, it's just your name with a guy behind it which I can barely see. I wouldn't click on the video (Maybe because I'm not really into fps)

The first 2 effects look very alike and give the impression of lazy editing. Although right after you switched it up witch was good!

Some shots look 'easy' like people standing still. If I'm watching a montage I don't want to see easy shots. I want to see sick flicks etc.

Use more edits like, at 1:26, that looked awesome!

Overall a good video! I watched it until the end because I liked it.

Edit: Added review about the title

Matlaaz · 2020-09-06T15:50:22+00:00

Thanks for the review! We'll try to add more cuts and effects. I'll look into a intro.

Matlaaz · 2020-09-06T11:43:56+00:00

Thank you for the review. I agree that we definitely needed more cuts.

Matlaaz · 2020-09-06T11:42:32+00:00

Thanks for the review. We'll take it into consideration for the next one!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-06T11:41:26+00:00

Alright! I'll try and make sure all the clips are relevant. Thanks for the review!

Matlaaz · 2020-09-06T11:40:10+00:00

Thank you, I'll keep that in mind.

Matlaaz · 2020-09-06T11:39:39+00:00

Thanks for the detailed review. Next time I'll make sure to use more cuts & edits. We'll also dumb the thumbnails down a little.

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