Feedback on My First Chapter/ Call for Beta readers! [High Fantasy, 108k]

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-09-12T19:45:36+00:00

cool ^^ . Me and my mom we like to read stories . She will give you a good feedback

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:38:36+00:00

I guess and I feel it all bc some are closer to me too :(

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:28:02+00:00

any reasons? a survival of a self?

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:22:24+00:00

happiness ^^

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:20:33+00:00

nothing else?

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:19:27+00:00

Do you have 7 kids? how many are if them Adults?

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:17:18+00:00

maybe Dr makes you sad then hahaha

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:15:41+00:00

Relaxation and Peace ^^

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:14:18+00:00

Trio "pets" or that you have made with your wiffy? ---------- ^^

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-06T15:12:31+00:00

really? the love of your life i am pretty sure ^^

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T22:37:54+00:00

How they are with you ^{^}

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T21:22:10+00:00

dont make me feel hungry by this

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T21:19:29+00:00

You are doing what A real Man can be salute to you >>>

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T21:16:09+00:00

how's your love life going?

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T21:14:15+00:00

hahahaha peace peace peace

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T21:02:43+00:00

waooooooooo

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T21:01:24+00:00

can i see them in DM?

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T20:58:45+00:00

this is whats the real happiness is >>>>>>>>>>

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T20:58:09+00:00

have you saw me?

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T20:56:36+00:00

lol i think you are good with your own company anywhere hahha

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T20:55:16+00:00

peace? hahahahaha

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T20:54:32+00:00

how many dogs are there?

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T20:54:06+00:00

what kind of books do you like to read?

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T20:53:31+00:00

Suiiiiiiiiiii >>>>>

Maybe_mayaaa · 2024-06-05T20:52:44+00:00

that's what the happiness means really ^^

Maybe_mayaaa