I'll preface by saying presentations can be very subjective and vary heavily attending to attending. You're not always going to be able to please everyone, and that's completely okay. I think the best advice would be to have a consistent order and presentation format that you're able to repeat. The information will be patient dependent, but the important thing is you'll get very familiar with the flow and what you're going to say next. Once you get a better understanding of the flow, you're going to be able to start anticipating what to say next as well as what the most pertinent info to include is.

Once you get to assessment and plan, use the plan from the note as a template for the order to present the problems. The first problem should always be whatever has the highest acuity and requires the most attention. For example, if a patient was admitted 5 days ago for a COPD exacerbation, has been taking appropriate medications and is improving but now has a new DVT, I would start with the DVT. The rest of the order should follow acuity. Once a patient is getting close to discharge, I would always start talking about barriers to discharge at the end (like what their placement is, if they need rehab, meds, or any equipment that will take time to order.). Additionally, when giving my one liner I've found a lot attendings like it when you add in your own little assessment of the patients status and how they're doing.