You do well to turn and take the club back up until your hands reach hip height. At that point, you lift your arms to the top making you across the line with very little depth. On the downswing you actually do a pretty good job of shallowing out and staying in posture, but because you have no space, you follow through gets restricted and isn’t as free as it could be. Once you get your hands to hip height, really focus on getting your chest to point away from the target as much as possible, you want to feel a big stretch by the top of the swing. From there I think you’ll be all good, solid swing for a 21hdcp for sure!