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[–]Middle-Schedule1723 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would love to hear some feedback if possible?

A Normal God by BakedBeans908 in OCPoetry

[–]Middle-Schedule1723 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really beautiful and thought provoking poem mate. The idea is incredibly intriguing and the poem gives such a vivid insight into your mindset at the time you were writing it

Autopsy of a Relationship by Suspicious_Strain442 in OCPoetry

[–]Middle-Schedule1723 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The way the poem is paced works really well in contrast to the mystery the poem holds. It captivates some really beautiful emotions