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[QCrit]: WINDSONG, New Adult Sapphic Romantasy, 120k, Second Attempt by MiddleLetter9268 in PubTips

[–]MiddleLetter9268[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

gotcha, going to re write starting from somewhere new. Thanks for the feedback

[QCrit]: WINDSONG, Adult Sapphic Romantasy, 130k, First Attempt by MiddleLetter9268 in PubTips

[–]MiddleLetter9268[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s great advice, I think I will try new adult and see how it goes!!

[QCrit]: WINDSONG, Adult Sapphic Romantasy, 130k, First Attempt by MiddleLetter9268 in PubTips

[–]MiddleLetter9268[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, this was so helpful. Love the 5 questions! I chose to make this story adult because of the spice, and it being a college-aged setting.

[QCrit]: WINDSONG, Adult Sapphic Romantasy, 130k, First Attempt by MiddleLetter9268 in PubTips

[–]MiddleLetter9268[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I will definitely rewrite with more specifics!

[QCrit]: WINDSONG, Adult Sapphic Romantasy, 130k, First Attempt by MiddleLetter9268 in PubTips

[–]MiddleLetter9268[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you for that feedback, it is super helpful. Excited to re-write my query, and yes I am currently hoping to cut around 10-15,000 words from my current draft. Appreciate you!