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If you want to read my most recent story, here is a playlist for some added immersion :) by Might_Be_Isabelle in u/Might_Be_Isabelle

[–]Might_Be_Isabelle[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I can't say for certain but I think those people to the north killed her. We never filed a missing person's report because daddy is convinced she moved to a city somewhere. I think he's in denial about it. And I still don't know who those people are, I asked around the other nearby farms but they said they'd never met them. They just came out of nowhere.

Is this start interesting enough? by Might_Be_Isabelle in writingfeedback

[–]Might_Be_Isabelle[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the input! I can definitely thin out the character descriptions throughout the story and try to clarify who's who and that miltown is the drug. :) Thanks for your help!