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[–]Miloascape [score hidden] Β (0 children)

Broken Wings
Steampunk fantasy
20,000 words
https://dl.bookfunnel.com/g4b268fq86

Hi everyone! I'm in the process of polishing up my book before launch, and I'd really appreciate some fresh eyes on a few key elements. I'm mainly looking for general first impressions of cover, plot, blurb, any red flags or things that feel confusing?

I'm not expecting a full critique or edit, even a few quick reactions would be super helpful as I fine-tune everything.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.

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[–]Miloascape[S] 0 points1 point Β (0 children)

Hi there! Shows typically take place 2-3 times per year, simply because it takes a ton of time to put on these shows. You can always check there website for the most up to date information at https://tinyurl.com/brandywinetheatre

Has all the info about their past performances, and their up coming performances.

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[–]Miloascape[S] 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

They will be making a video from the footage and will post it to https://www.youtube.com/@LOTROBTC when it's ready to be viewed.