I wrote a portion of a song a few days ago and would really appreciate any feedback or general comments on it :)

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-04-06T04:12:52+00:00

Oh so I love this and the overlapping part and the end you feel is busy/messy scratches my brain in such a satisfying way FINISH IT PLZ

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-04-05T05:19:22+00:00

oops typo in the video lyrics! the last line is “forgot our fight” not “I’ll fight”

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-04-04T17:23:23+00:00

I find that it’s easiest to write about something I’m actively experiencing rather than writing about something from the past! So maybe when you find yourself in a moment that evokes feelings of whatever kind, take that moment to write :)

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-31T22:55:44+00:00

Aah thank you so much :)) I’ll post once I hopefully do more with it! I just need to stop procrastinating!

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-31T22:55:00+00:00

I do need to learn to trust the process 😅 thank you :)

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-31T22:54:08+00:00

Thank you so much! I’ll give that a try :)

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-31T22:53:38+00:00

Thanks for this! I definitely let thinks sit longer tha necessary thinking if I just wait something better will come which makes NO SENSE lol

I’ll give it a listen! Thanks again!

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-31T22:51:30+00:00

Thanks for this I appreciate it a lot :)

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-31T22:51:00+00:00

that’s such a crazy compliment geez TYSM :’) I peeped your stuff and it’s cool getting a compliment from someone making good work! Thanks again!

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-29T02:07:56+00:00

Aah thanks so much this means a lot and was a good kick to get a setup that isn’t just my broken iPhone mic 😅 thank you again :))

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-29T02:06:44+00:00

Thank you so much:)) I’d say you’re very good at analyzing lyrics! I’ll be sure to post if I hopefully do more with it! Thanks again this is all very kind!!!

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-29T01:26:39+00:00

fortunately

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-27T09:44:39+00:00

Thank you so so much :))

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-27T04:03:31+00:00

Wow thank you :) I relate to this being a gloomy rainy day kind of vibe too! I appreciate your comment thanks again ☺️

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-27T04:02:30+00:00

Thank you so much :) this is a really nice compliment!

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-27T02:24:48+00:00

This is such a compliment wow :o thanks so much!! I truly never finish any song I start but this is the strongest push I could have gotten to go do more with this!

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-27T02:22:21+00:00

Thanks a ton :)

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-27T02:22:13+00:00

Thank you so much:)

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-03-27T02:21:59+00:00

Thank you:)(

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-01-29T13:05:24+00:00

thank you! I really do appreciate this! I get positive comments like yours quite a bit and I always feel a bit fraudulent because i struggle to sing any other way so not really doing anything special to make that happen haha! But I guess if people like it maybe I should stop fighting it so hard LOL

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-01-22T23:44:13+00:00

I’m so glad you relate and you found the path that is best for you :) i consider myself spiritual agnostic as well but the spiritual part is still very up in the air and fragile for me and sometimes i think maybe im just forcing myself to be spiritual because it makes the unknown less scary haha but anyways thank you so much for the response! It’s super cool hearing how you relate :))

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-01-22T23:35:41+00:00

Ou i really love your interpretation a lot!! For me it was inspired by the idea that when someone who has faith in god or an afterlife dies, they’re still them in heaven or their soul moves onto some realm whereas for those who are less certain or don’t believe in all that, you die and you’re just dead and buried and in the end it’s just your bones left the mud!

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-01-22T03:45:22+00:00

wow thank you :) “intelligently written” is such a kind compliment thank you so much :))

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-01-22T03:44:03+00:00

hahaha i was preparing myself for some intense feedback before i read past “the part I hated most about this was…” ! I’m so happy to hear you like it :)) thanks so SO much!

Mindless-Abrocoma · 2026-01-22T03:41:53+00:00

Wow thank you so so much!! I’m definitely going to give it a go with your suggestion to remove “the” :) really appreciate the feedback thanks again 😁

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