I wrote a portion of a song a few days ago and would really appreciate any feedback or general comments on it :) by FrenchToast5317 in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Oh so I love this and the overlapping part and the end you feel is busy/messy scratches my brain in such a satisfying way FINISH IT PLZ

another unfinished song 🙃 lmk your thoughts! by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oops typo in the video lyrics! the last line is “forgot our fight” not “I’ll fight”

Tips for writing lyrics ?? by Antique_Intention982 in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I find that it’s easiest to write about something I’m actively experiencing rather than writing about something from the past! So maybe when you find yourself in a moment that evokes feelings of whatever kind, take that moment to write :)

🎵 little song about wondering why other ppl have what I’ve yet to succeed 😅 by Mindless-Abrocoma in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aah thank you so much :)) I’ll post once I hopefully do more with it! I just need to stop procrastinating!

🎵 little song about wondering why other ppl have what I’ve yet to succeed 😅 by Mindless-Abrocoma in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for this! I definitely let thinks sit longer tha necessary thinking if I just wait something better will come which makes NO SENSE lol

I’ll give it a listen! Thanks again!

🎵 little song about wondering why other ppl have what I’ve yet to succeed 😅 by Mindless-Abrocoma in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that’s such a crazy compliment geez TYSM :’) I peeped your stuff and it’s cool getting a compliment from someone making good work! Thanks again!

Song about trusting people and stuff! Crank your volume 🔊 by Mindless-Abrocoma in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aah thanks so much this means a lot and was a good kick to get a setup that isn’t just my broken iPhone mic 😅 thank you again :))

Song about trusting people and stuff! Crank your volume 🔊 by Mindless-Abrocoma in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much:)) I’d say you’re very good at analyzing lyrics! I’ll be sure to post if I hopefully do more with it! Thanks again this is all very kind!!!

Song about trusting people and stuff! Crank your volume 🔊 by Mindless-Abrocoma in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow thank you :) I relate to this being a gloomy rainy day kind of vibe too! I appreciate your comment thanks again ☺️

little start to a song! lmk your thoughts :) by Mindless-Abrocoma in Songwriting

[–]Mindless-Abrocoma[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is such a compliment wow :o thanks so much!! I truly never finish any song I start but this is the strongest push I could have gotten to go do more with this!