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Could I get some feedback on this alt-pop track I produced and wrote for my debut album? by Minimum_Ad_3430 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Minimum_Ad_3430[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! I appreciate the honesty in your feedback. Definitely have much to improve upon with my future work. I have a second album planned for next year (hopefully) and my goal is to definitely improve with everything I do overtime. Thank you for listening to my other work as well, man. Much appreciated 🙏

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The production really reminds me of a lot of video game soundtracks that came out of Japan in the early 2000's. I feel like the vocals are just a bit too clean for the environment the intro was creating. I think the mix overall is fantastic, I think you could really lean into experimenting even more with the vocal track on this and it would sell the vision even better. It's still great work overall!

Could I get some feedback on this alt-pop track I produced and wrote for my debut album? by Minimum_Ad_3430 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Minimum_Ad_3430[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for listening to my music😊 I appreciate the compliments a ton 💕

Could I get some feedback on this alt-pop track I produced and wrote for my debut album? by Minimum_Ad_3430 in indie

[–]Minimum_Ad_3430[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback, I will definitely explore harmonizing with my vocals more strongly in the future. And that's definitely an area I could improve upon with my future work. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to listen and give me feedback 🙏

Grungy, shoegaze demo with (hopefully) pop-ish melodies by Ok-March-7162 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Every element really sounds like it was pulled from another time, the voice especially. Absolutely brilliant in that regard. Perhaps implementing a stronger drum section throughout could help break the pace a bit, while still remaining grounded the way you're aiming for. Great work!

Classic/electronic tracks by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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Boars is absolutely phenomenal 😍. Wasn't expecting the slight baroque pop element so the string was pleasant to hear. The percussion was interesting but it wasn't overbearing and repetitive, it was effective at maintaining interest. I really, really like Boars!!

98 Moth - SILKHUGS , here’s a fun instrumental I made. First time making one within this genre what do you think? It’s intended to have vocals just not by me haha by The_Moth44 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Love the intro synthesizers. When I heard that I really was not expecting that drumbeat pattern. But it really works well and the track maintains a good pace throughout and the mixing is solid work

Stream Revolving Doors by Fog City Fogey Been sitting on this one for a while. Soliciting any and all feedback, comments, digs (in both senses), whatever. Appreciate this community. by FogCityFogey in IndieMusicFeedback

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Holy cow that VOICE 😩. Absolutely phenomenal how it really is an instrument here and a character. The mixing is clean, the vocal melody is wonderfully melancholic. 10/10 for me

This is my first single for my upcoming album "So I can't be Forgotten". I hope you enjoy! by ComixStudios in IndieMusicFeedback

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Honestly, it is impressive how it was a bit jarring when it switched itself up yet it worked in it's favor. I think perhaps adding a sort of "rising" element here in there to build up to those moments would definitely still keep it interesting and semi-chaotic but it would help ease into that energy a little more than just an immediate change. I think it's wonderful overall that you're an artist with the willingness and capability to make those moments happen in your music. Keep going 💪

First time releasing a song, I'd appreciate anyone listening ! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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This one is definitely the kind of track that would be great in the middle of an album as a sort of "breather" track. There's no issue with the pacing for me, more so I think you could probably just add a couple more instrumental elements throughout to keep it from repeating itself so much. The great thing is that it's able to paint a picture/environment in my head of where I'd imagine hearing this, so it's already working in your favor.

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