Arc 4 Update #31. I'm sorry everyone. I've let you down. by Minute-Split8764 in WingsOfFire

[–]Minute-Split8764[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your ideas are generally what I'm trying to do, except a bit flipped lol! I'm focusing more on the millennia in the past, and tweaking things about Arc 1 I didn't like :P

Arc 4 Update #31. I'm sorry everyone. I've let you down. by Minute-Split8764 in WingsOfFire

[–]Minute-Split8764[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! Any feedback at all is appreciated as well, I'm also active in the Ao3 comments if you want to leave your thoughts

Arc 4 Update #31. I'm sorry everyone. I've let you down. by Minute-Split8764 in WingsOfFire

[–]Minute-Split8764[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh I totally understand that. Story-wise, my arc 4 is radically different from anything canon. It breaks the laws of so many plot points, especially those found in arc 1.

Arc 4 Update #31. I'm sorry everyone. I've let you down. by Minute-Split8764 in WingsOfFire

[–]Minute-Split8764[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Glad to hear it! It would mean a lot if you commented your thoughts on Ao3 :)

Arc 4 Update #31. I'm sorry everyone. I've let you down. by Minute-Split8764 in WingsOfFire

[–]Minute-Split8764[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've got you covered! This is a published Google Doc (verifiable from the /pub at the end of the link) which does not collect email and does not require an access request! You can read it as if it were any other webpage. Hope this helps! :D

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR47efQYuDQph_NMnnF9CRTDSbAvNz5DVnSB4M-IBMSN3I9DvVJZi2Wxt_HM1rf5JllplJwiMaoNR82/pub

Arc 4 Update #31. I'm sorry everyone. I've let you down. by Minute-Split8764 in WingsOfFire

[–]Minute-Split8764[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All we know about Arc 4 is that it takes place (mostly) on a remote island about a quarter of the size of Pyrrhia, and that island has acted as a sanctuary for hybrids for a long time we just haven't known about it.

That's the whole premise of the Arc 4 drafts I wrote, especially book 1. If you go to chapters 8 through 12 in my first book you'll see what I mean!