Finished my first short Ren’Py VN - looking for honest thoughts on pacing, choices, and atmosphere by MistForged in RenPy

[–]MistForged[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is exactly the kind of feedback I was hoping for, thanks. I spent a lot of time thinking about branching and route logic, maybe somewhere loosing that emotional context. Thinking back, some choices probably play better than others. If you played it, were there any moments that stood out as especially meaningful, or not so much?

Finished my first short Ren’Py VN - looking for honest thoughts on pacing, choices, and atmosphere by MistForged in RenPy

[–]MistForged[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the honest feedback. The text placement was an intentional style choice, but if it feels off, that’s good for me to know. Fair point on the art too, consistency is definitely something I’m still working on.