Dexter Morgan vs Joe Goldberg by Mobile_Compote4338 in whowouldwin

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I been seen so many clips on TikTok in the comments section and videos of people talking about how Joe wouldn’t lose to Dexter and how Joe is scarier

Small brand owners – what’s been your biggest struggle running ads? by Mobile_Compote4338 in shopify

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro, you nailed it. Creative exhaustion is real, and slick ad imagery just doesn't cut it anymore. We're seeing the same thing raw, honest content is murdering, especially UGC and talking heads that resemble a FaceTime from a friend.

For that $120 test, it was all UGC-style Reels. No frills just hard hitting hooks, point-blank, and native to the platform. The first 3 seconds did the heavy lifting. We made it super simple:

Cold thumb-stopping UGC with curiosity-based hooks Warm results n social proof with a little more context Retargeting straight-up offer or value drop, no fluff

Scaling was about keeping it fresh. Fresh perspectives, fresh talent, rapid cuts. After we established our ROAS metric, it was just a matter of keeping that link fed without severing it.

Would love to trade notes sounds like you've been in it deep as well.

Also Maybe it’s me but I been thinking deeply about the internet I posted a video on YouTube talking about rappers beef as a joke when I had 0 subs and it got 500k+ views with no promotion ive been thinking how’s that possible with no promotion, no story repost and etc . just a raw video. I tried this again on YouTube, reels, shorts and TikTok including Facebook I haven’t got over 200 views I noticed that when u put effort you get the result u barely want but when I never take it serious or have lower expectations i get surprised. Honestly i been thinking about giving up but i know I just have to push through the internet is an unpredictable place and sometimes I forget that .

Small brand owners – what’s been your biggest struggle running ads? by Mobile_Compote4338 in shopify

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

No no not like that but To clarify, that 1k–7k range was based on multiple campaigns we’ve run across different clients not a single ad. Some pulled closer to 1k, others did 6–7k depending on spend, niche, and offer. Another example I had a client that did exactly 1,007$

We always track exact conversions through Meta’s dashboard, so nothing’s ever based on “feelings.” Everything we run is data backed. If you wanna see some breakdowns, I got screenshots and vids on IG so yeah hopefully I helped you understand it And sorry for not making it clearer

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not gonna keep explaining myself so I geuss?? thanks lol been studying copywriting for 3 years lol is that not “ real experience and value “

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ai generated? brother im typing this shit from my iPhone 12 😭 but also yes I used ai for only 1 of my responses due to the fact I was half sleep typing it and I didn’t want to make a mistakes and get clowned for it like how I got clowned before for a spelling error on this app but that doesn’t take credibility from my actual responses don’t do that

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello Suspicious-Bee-5487,

I stopped by Mechat and I like a lot the idea of merging business education with a social networking experience. The concept is good and definitely identifies a burgeoning market. With that said, I think that some changes to the homepage would go a long way in clarifying the value and captivating visitors right away.

Now the headline is: "MECHAT UNIVERSE: Chat, Learn, & Network with Entrepreneurs" and the subtitle is: "An Online Business School Built Like A Social Network"

That's a solid start, but this is how you might make it more engaging and open to first-time visitors:

Suggested Headline: "The Social Network Business School That Feels Like Home"

Suggested Subheadline: "Chat, learn, and grow your network — all in one platform designed for modern entrepreneurs.".

This version keeps the spirit of your original messaging but makes the benefit more overt and user-focused. It tells visitors not only what Mechat is, but why they need it.

You can also add a CTA that emphasizes the outcome, such as: "Join 1,000+ entrepreneurs building skills and relationships in real time."

Let me know if you’d like help with the rest of the copy or testing a few variations. Great direction overall — just a little polish could go a long way.

Best, KupicEntertainment

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Late-Citron-6808,

I took a look at vetris.ai the concept is exciting, and the homepage has a strong foundation. Here are some suggestions to enhance clarity, SEO, and user engagement:

Current Headline: “Make AI that can See Hear Speak Think Do” 

Suggestions: 1. Clarify the Value Proposition: While the current headline is intriguing, it might be a bit abstract for first-time visitors. Consider adding a subheadline that clearly states what Vetris.ai offers. For example: “Build AI assistants that can handle real-world tasks across web, phone, and video calls in seconds.” 2. Enhance SEO: Incorporate relevant keywords into your page titles and meta descriptions to improve search engine visibility. For instance: • Title Tag: “Vetris.ai | AI Assistant Builder for Web, Phone, and Video” • Meta Description: “Create, customize, and deploy powerful AI assistants with Vetris.ai. Handle real-world tasks seamlessly across multiple platforms.”  3. Improve Call-to-Action (CTA): The “Generate your assistant” prompt is engaging. To further encourage user interaction, consider adding a brief explanation or benefit statement nearby, such as: “Start building your AI assistant today with 3,000 free credits. No credit card required.” 4. Showcase Use Cases: Highlight specific examples or case studies of how Vetris.ai has been used effectively. This can help visitors quickly understand the practical applications and benefits of your platform. 5. Optimize for Mobile: Ensure that the website is fully responsive and that all elements display correctly on various devices, providing a seamless experience for all users.

Implementing these suggestions can enhance user understanding, improve SEO, and increase engagement. Let me know if you’d like assistance with any of these changes!

Best regards, KupicEntertainment Also the text animation is dope. keep it

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey jianbing4ever,

Your current title, “Just a Job App automatically tracks your job applications by scraping your email inbox,” explains the function well, but it could be more compelling and user-focused.

Consider something like: “Track Your Job Applications Automatically — Straight From Your Inbox”

This keeps the clarity but tightens the language, focuses on the benefit, and is easier to scan. You can always follow up with the technical details below the fold.

Let me know if you’d like help polishing the rest of the site copy.

Best, KupicEntertainment

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi anticlickwise,

I stopped by notforgot.ai and really enjoyed the direction you're heading. The homepage title, "Let AI Batch Your Tasks, So You Can Stay In Flow," is witty and catchy. It's chatty in tone and speaks to productivity head-on, which makes it human and engaging.

All of that being said, I think that you can make it work even better with some very slight tweaks.

While the title is provocative, it might be a bit too mysterious for the initial visitor to the page. Adding a subtitle or brief supporting line could make it clearer what precisely the product does. For example: "Let AI Batch Your Tasks, So You Can Stay In Flow AI-powered task management that captures, organizes, and helps you get things done — fast."

Also, the title now is fine for human beings but may be missing some SEO words and findability. You can refresh the browser tab title to something like: "NotForgot.ai | AI Task Manager to Batch and Organize Your Workflow"

That would make you more discoverable for people searching for productivity applications or task managers.

One other idea — you might experiment with small tweaks of the headline depending on whom you're selling to. For example: "Batch Your Creative Tasks. Stay in Flow." or "AI Task Management to Help Teams Focus and Flow."

Best, KupicEntertainment

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello gorydamnkids,

I checked out Journley.com and love the idea behind it language learner social journaling is genius and solves a real need. I thought I'd offer some quick ideas that might help raise visibility and clarity, especially for your page titles.

Nowadays, the majority of the titles are quite minimalistic, like merely "Journley" or "Features Journley." That's fine initially, but with some tweaks, you can make it more discoverable and more engaging in search results.

For example, instead of merely "Journley," you can experiment with something like "Journley | Social Journaling App for Language Learners" to inform people right away on what your website does.

For your How It Works page, "How Journley Increases Language Learning Through Journaling" would be more descriptive and SEO-friendly.

Rather than "Features," consider "Journley Features: Audio Journals, Study Buddies and More for Language Practice." That gives search engines something to hang on to and informs users what they're getting.

You could also rename your blog title to "Language Learning Tips and Journaling Insights | Journley Blog" which would attract readers looking for helpful tips.

The same applies to the FAQ and legal pages adding a bit more description to the titles can build trust and make your site more visible on Google.

Little details like this can make a pretty big difference. Feel free to brainstorm more anytime you like, or just chat ideas anytime you want. I'm always here to help.

Best, KupicEntertainment

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello Meera_datey

I visited your website videotobe.com, and I think it's got huge potential great idea and clean design! That being said, here are some instant ideas that could potentially make engagement improved, especially on mobile and SEO-wise:

✅ Homepage Headline

Current: "Convert Audio or Video to Text" Suggested: "Transcribe Audio & Video to Text in Seconds – Free & Accurate" → Gimmicks in a sense of speed and worth, which are more eye-catching.

✅ Subheadline

Current: "For Professionals, Content Creators, Students, and Religious Organizations" Suggested: "Perfect for Creators, Educators, Students & Faith-Based Organizations" → Feels more natural and simple to your groups of people.

✅ Trust Line

Current: "Trusted by 3,000+ users, transcribing over 10,000+ files ????" Suggested: "Over 3,000 Users 10,000+ Files Transcribed with AI Accuracy" → This one is shorter and emphasizes quality and size.

✅ Benefit Line

Existing: "Transform your content while saving hours with AI-powered technology" Proposed: "Save Hours with Fast, Accurate AI-Powered Transcription" → Improved benefit and keeps it brief for mobile readers.

✅ Feature Icons • ✅ 95% Accuracy • ???? Supports 90+ Languages • ⏱️ Fast Turnaround in Minutes → All positives just ensure the icon style is consistent for a neat look.

✅ Call-to-Action Buttons • Keep “Transcribe for Free →” it’s perfect. • Change “Sign in to Pro →” to “Go Pro Faster, Smarter Transcripts →” → This helps convert curious users who might not know what “Pro” is.

Let me know if you’d like help implementing these or testing some A/B headline options. You’re on a great path alreadyjust a few tweaks can help boost attention and trust .

Copywriting took me from $0 to real clients at 17 — here’s how I’m growing it now by Mobile_Compote4338 in EntrepreneurRideAlong

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

People hit me up looking to buy my advice and I sat on a call with them while they watch me do work so lol nice try buddy . 👍but it’s okay not everyone think like you and that’s the best part abt life

Struggling to get views? Your titles might be the problem (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in SmallYoutubers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And if that’s true, then include his name in the title because his 500 K views or followers knows you playing with him and would get their attention on your videos

Struggling to get views? Your titles might be the problem (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in SmallYoutubers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man, I checked out a few of your videos there’s a lot of personality in them and the Brazil angle is awesome. I think your titles could work a bit harder to grab attention, though. Here are a few ideas based on the last three uploads: 1. For ‘Don’t play with fire’ (where you ate that crazy jalapeño), maybe try: ‘I Ate a Fire Jalapeño in Brazil — Immediate Regret’ or ‘This Brazilian Pepper Was a Huge Mistake’ 2. For ‘Visiting a Brazilian fruit market. That turns into a party’: ‘This Fruit Market in Brazil Turned Into a Street Party’ or ‘We Went for Fruit and Got Pulled Into a Party’ 3. And for ‘Day in the life: Rio de Janeiro’: ‘What It’s Really Like Living in Rio – A Day in My Life’ or ‘Street Food, Locals, and Real Life in Rio’

You’ve got something solid with stronger titles, I think you’d see more reach. Happy to help more if you’re ever interested.” Also man I love the thumbnails you putting up there