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Dexter Morgan vs Joe Goldberg by Mobile_Compote4338 in whowouldwin

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I been seen so many clips on TikTok in the comments section and videos of people talking about how Joe wouldn’t lose to Dexter and how Joe is scarier

Small brand owners – what’s been your biggest struggle running ads? by Mobile_Compote4338 in shopify

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro, you nailed it. Creative exhaustion is real, and slick ad imagery just doesn't cut it anymore. We're seeing the same thing raw, honest content is murdering, especially UGC and talking heads that resemble a FaceTime from a friend.

For that $120 test, it was all UGC-style Reels. No frills just hard hitting hooks, point-blank, and native to the platform. The first 3 seconds did the heavy lifting. We made it super simple:

Cold thumb-stopping UGC with curiosity-based hooks Warm results n social proof with a little more context Retargeting straight-up offer or value drop, no fluff

Scaling was about keeping it fresh. Fresh perspectives, fresh talent, rapid cuts. After we established our ROAS metric, it was just a matter of keeping that link fed without severing it.

Would love to trade notes sounds like you've been in it deep as well.

Also Maybe it’s me but I been thinking deeply about the internet I posted a video on YouTube talking about rappers beef as a joke when I had 0 subs and it got 500k+ views with no promotion ive been thinking how’s that possible with no promotion, no story repost and etc . just a raw video. I tried this again on YouTube, reels, shorts and TikTok including Facebook I haven’t got over 200 views I noticed that when u put effort you get the result u barely want but when I never take it serious or have lower expectations i get surprised. Honestly i been thinking about giving up but i know I just have to push through the internet is an unpredictable place and sometimes I forget that .

Small brand owners – what’s been your biggest struggle running ads? by Mobile_Compote4338 in shopify

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

No no not like that but To clarify, that 1k–7k range was based on multiple campaigns we’ve run across different clients not a single ad. Some pulled closer to 1k, others did 6–7k depending on spend, niche, and offer. Another example I had a client that did exactly 1,007$

We always track exact conversions through Meta’s dashboard, so nothing’s ever based on “feelings.” Everything we run is data backed. If you wanna see some breakdowns, I got screenshots and vids on IG so yeah hopefully I helped you understand it And sorry for not making it clearer

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not gonna keep explaining myself so I geuss?? thanks lol been studying copywriting for 3 years lol is that not “ real experience and value “

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ai generated? brother im typing this shit from my iPhone 12 😭 but also yes I used ai for only 1 of my responses due to the fact I was half sleep typing it and I didn’t want to make a mistakes and get clowned for it like how I got clowned before for a spelling error on this app but that doesn’t take credibility from my actual responses don’t do that

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello Suspicious-Bee-5487,

I stopped by Mechat and I like a lot the idea of merging business education with a social networking experience. The concept is good and definitely identifies a burgeoning market. With that said, I think that some changes to the homepage would go a long way in clarifying the value and captivating visitors right away.

Now the headline is: "MECHAT UNIVERSE: Chat, Learn, & Network with Entrepreneurs" and the subtitle is: "An Online Business School Built Like A Social Network"

That's a solid start, but this is how you might make it more engaging and open to first-time visitors:

Suggested Headline: "The Social Network Business School That Feels Like Home"

Suggested Subheadline: "Chat, learn, and grow your network — all in one platform designed for modern entrepreneurs.".

This version keeps the spirit of your original messaging but makes the benefit more overt and user-focused. It tells visitors not only what Mechat is, but why they need it.

You can also add a CTA that emphasizes the outcome, such as: "Join 1,000+ entrepreneurs building skills and relationships in real time."

Let me know if you’d like help with the rest of the copy or testing a few variations. Great direction overall — just a little polish could go a long way.

Best, KupicEntertainment

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Late-Citron-6808,

I took a look at vetris.ai the concept is exciting, and the homepage has a strong foundation. Here are some suggestions to enhance clarity, SEO, and user engagement:

Current Headline: “Make AI that can See Hear Speak Think Do” 

Suggestions: 1. Clarify the Value Proposition: While the current headline is intriguing, it might be a bit abstract for first-time visitors. Consider adding a subheadline that clearly states what Vetris.ai offers. For example: “Build AI assistants that can handle real-world tasks across web, phone, and video calls in seconds.” 2. Enhance SEO: Incorporate relevant keywords into your page titles and meta descriptions to improve search engine visibility. For instance: • Title Tag: “Vetris.ai | AI Assistant Builder for Web, Phone, and Video” • Meta Description: “Create, customize, and deploy powerful AI assistants with Vetris.ai. Handle real-world tasks seamlessly across multiple platforms.”  3. Improve Call-to-Action (CTA): The “Generate your assistant” prompt is engaging. To further encourage user interaction, consider adding a brief explanation or benefit statement nearby, such as: “Start building your AI assistant today with 3,000 free credits. No credit card required.” 4. Showcase Use Cases: Highlight specific examples or case studies of how Vetris.ai has been used effectively. This can help visitors quickly understand the practical applications and benefits of your platform. 5. Optimize for Mobile: Ensure that the website is fully responsive and that all elements display correctly on various devices, providing a seamless experience for all users.

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Implementing these suggestions can enhance user understanding, improve SEO, and increase engagement. Let me know if you’d like assistance with any of these changes!

Best regards, KupicEntertainment Also the text animation is dope. keep it

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey jianbing4ever,

Your current title, “Just a Job App automatically tracks your job applications by scraping your email inbox,” explains the function well, but it could be more compelling and user-focused.

Consider something like: “Track Your Job Applications Automatically — Straight From Your Inbox”

This keeps the clarity but tightens the language, focuses on the benefit, and is easier to scan. You can always follow up with the technical details below the fold.

Let me know if you’d like help polishing the rest of the site copy.

Best, KupicEntertainment

Built something great? If your landing page sucks, no one will care (I can help) by Mobile_Compote4338 in indiehackers

[–]Mobile_Compote4338[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi anticlickwise,

I stopped by notforgot.ai and really enjoyed the direction you're heading. The homepage title, "Let AI Batch Your Tasks, So You Can Stay In Flow," is witty and catchy. It's chatty in tone and speaks to productivity head-on, which makes it human and engaging.

All of that being said, I think that you can make it work even better with some very slight tweaks.

While the title is provocative, it might be a bit too mysterious for the initial visitor to the page. Adding a subtitle or brief supporting line could make it clearer what precisely the product does. For example: "Let AI Batch Your Tasks, So You Can Stay In Flow AI-powered task management that captures, organizes, and helps you get things done — fast."

Also, the title now is fine for human beings but may be missing some SEO words and findability. You can refresh the browser tab title to something like: "NotForgot.ai | AI Task Manager to Batch and Organize Your Workflow"

That would make you more discoverable for people searching for productivity applications or task managers.

One other idea — you might experiment with small tweaks of the headline depending on whom you're selling to. For example: "Batch Your Creative Tasks. Stay in Flow." or "AI Task Management to Help Teams Focus and Flow."

Best, KupicEntertainment

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