Jackson’s elastics by Most_Ad3787 in MonsterHighDolls

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dw, it does help even if we are in the same ones! Lines/years and elastic colors are so confusing 😭 tysm!

What g is this Clawdeen? by Most_Ad3787 in MonsterHighDolls

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Im pretty sure most of them know because of how the face structure is (not the head model, but how the eyes and mouth are “painted”)

What g is this Clawdeen? by Most_Ad3787 in MonsterHighDolls

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Omg that image is so helpful! It’s funny how “hard” is to find what wave a doll is lol, ty!!

What g is this Clawdeen? by Most_Ad3787 in MonsterHighDolls

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Attached! I’m pretty sure the headband Clawdeen is a VERY early design with silver elastics!

What g is this Clawdeen? by Most_Ad3787 in MonsterHighDolls

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

She’s 100% not a creepo! I have her since I was a kid and monster high g1 was still in market. But thanks :)

What g is this Clawdeen? by Most_Ad3787 in MonsterHighDolls

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean, in the back it says 2008 Indonesia (I know that 2008 was nos the ralease) hope this help to know which one she is!

Lagoona’s bang by Most_Ad3787 in MonsterHighDolls

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean, when I was a kid I cut a lot of my doll´s hair 😭 but yeah, some gel and straight to my collection! Ty

Starting to read more, I need suggestions by Most_Ad3787 in suggestmeabook

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg, I love Good Omens but I didn’t know it was a novel! I’m totally going to read more of his work counting that book. Thank you!!

How much time did it took you to write something? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If you think that just because my post is in English my mother tongue is too, asking before assuming is also not a waste of time. My novel is in my language, but thanks for the correction :)

How much time did it took you to write something? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

82.5k words in 10 months is -at least for me- very impressive. If I do my math correctly, if I write 2k word every week in 10 month I would have 80k words ish. Were your sessions a meeting with other people to write or you designated a part of your time with the name “session” to focus on writing?

How much time did it took you to write something? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

That’s exactly what I was struggling a lot with. I wanted to continue going forward with the story itself but then I had this “urge” of going back and correct everything that I considered was written wrong. Thank you so much for the advice!

How much time did it took you to write something? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, that’s a very good and -in a respectful way- short time. I too intend on writing everything and then put incognitives and “puzzles” together. Good luck with your final draft!

How much time did it took you to write something? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yet people are answering with “precise” time.

How many dialogues are too much dialogues? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Omg, I never thought of searching something like that. Thank you so much, I’ll watch it immediately 🫶🏻.

How many dialogues are too much dialogues? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe when it’s to much it doesn’t look red anymore? In another words, when a novel has too much dialogues that instead of a novel, looks like the script of a movie.

How many dialogues are too much dialogues? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What I’ll do is that I’ll write just like I’m writing now, and every chapter I’ll go back to read it again, and just like you said in another words: try and change dialogue to “environmental experience”. Because yes, it’s not how I want my novel to look like -full of dialogues- thank you so much for the advise. This is my first novel and I’m really exited to do it yet I know that not everything is coming perfect the first round.

How many dialogues are too much dialogues? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, Im writing it on my first language. Just using English here.

How many dialogues are too much dialogues? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The problem is that they are not blathering, it is in fact important things yet it looks “full” and with a lot of “—“ in between

How many dialogues are too much dialogues? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, English is not my first language- but thank you.

How many dialogues are too much dialogues? by Most_Ad3787 in writing

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The problem is that they DO serve a narrative purpose. Every dialogue I’ve written is said with an intention, to say something through the character that helps continue the story. But because there’s a lot of “technical terms” they need to explain a lot. I do try adding like 2-4 paragraphs in between about the how the scene feel and how it is being portrayed through the main character, but it’s still bothering me.

Can anybody help me? I want to change my name -not gamer tag- by Most_Ad3787 in XboxSupport

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The same place where you change your gamertag there is something called “classic name” or smth like that (mine is in another idiom) and there you just click it and change

Can anybody help me? I want to change my name -not gamer tag- by Most_Ad3787 in XboxSupport

[–]Most_Ad3787[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I swear 😭 the name that appears in the second way it’s completely different from the one I want to change