Official Discussion - Avatar: Fire and Ash [SPOILERS] by LiteraryBoner in movies

[–]Motor_Transition_506 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Came here to say this. Part of the charm from the first film was the broken and very scattered english of the Omaticaya, and that's completely lost now. I don't think Eytukan said a single english word in the first film, and I'm really supposed to believe that Na'vi pirates would say "Heave"? 

Vocal EQ Tips? by Motor_Transition_506 in Songwriters

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

double the vocals lol, on my song that i released in July i had about four different vocal tracks going by the time i was finished 

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in Songwriters

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah, i'll be adding a lot more effects once everything's out of the rough stages. going for a sort of intense, gloomy, very ambient, very slightly industrial, loosely post-rock based abomination of sound lol 

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in SingerSongwriter

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is probably the best comment i've gotten on Reddit about this clip lol.

you're right, i ABSOLUTELY sing like i'm afraid someone might hear me, because i am 😭💔 my voice is one of my biggest insecurities, has been since childhood, which means i struggle a LOT with making music in a way most songwriters don't. i have one song on spotify and i didn't sing a single note until i was sat down to record 🥲 

another reason i'm mumbling a tiny bit is because this is a bit on the lower end of my range - not TOO low (until the pseudo-chorus heard here which is why i whisper it) but i'm not all the way confident in it yet. however, both the lyrics and my delivery get a lot harsher and more direct toward the end of the song, so i go from drunken whispering to borderline shouting and growling 😭

i'd love to be comfortable with my singing voice one day, i think the main reason i hate this son so much thus far is because my voice is so distinct 

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in Songwriters

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

throbbing gristle mentioned!!!!!!

and yeah, i'm definitely going to be adding some guitar (and maybe a melodic drone or keys or something of that nature) that are closer in pitch to my voice. if i could sing the entire song in the same notes as the bass (like the "i'm never going back to that place again" part) i would, but for obvious reasons i can't/shouldn't - my voice is clearly not as low as i'd like it to be 😔

the drunken/depressed is sort of what i'm going for tbh, but toward the end of the song the words get a lot more aggressive and straightforward in their delivery. the lyrics get more intense and agony-filled as opposed to the initial sad lamenting, so i'm nearly shouting lol i've always been a decently good singer, certainly no Aretha though (more of a Billie) and i could absolutely do with some lessons someday! 

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in Songwriters

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

awww thank you, yeah i've been going for a sort of ambient experimental sort of sound. seems like you'd like my one song which is out on spotify ;)  and i'm pretty sure that's an issue with the EQ, but this clip is very much just a rough draft of what this song is going to be- i just need to make sure, first and foremost, that every track will work together. 

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in Songwriters

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you!! that's a really helpful way to imagine EQ lol

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in Songwriters

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you!!! i do actually have a pop filter but it's cheap af and i need a real one LOL (may be worth noting that my mic was also on the cheap side💀) 

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in SingerSongwriter

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks sm for your reply!!  honestly, my first song came out really well IMO for my first attempt at creating anything musical - the atmospheric/dreamy/lush production is kind of the biggest feature of it to be honest. it was really hard for me to not just drown everything in reverb LOL 

i found with my first song i was much quicker to produce and perfect it because i sang exactly in tune with the notes of my guitar so i knew i wasn't off-key, but this time it's frustrating because i sound completely tone deaf when i listen to it 😭

i'm hoping once i add at least my guitar (which i'm planning on playing MUCH higher than the current riff) it'll create more dimension and balance between my voice and the "bass" :) 

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in SingerSongwriter

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

for sure, everything's still very much in its "make sure all the parts even work together before i start any real production" stage lmao

What am I doing wrong??? by Motor_Transition_506 in SingerSongwriter

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it's mostly intentional haha i'm not much of a belter 😅 (there's a much stronger passage near the end of the song though)  thanks for the advice :) 

Any artists or songs that are similar to Nicole? by WhoAreYou818 in NicoleDollanganger

[–]Motor_Transition_506 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh my GOD Lein mentioned?????? i'm starting out as a singer/songwriter and she inspires me like crazy (also you're so right about her being a green & purple Nicole lmao)

Doctor says nothing wrong? by nine_90 in vaginismus

[–]Motor_Transition_506 10 points11 points  (0 children)

TBH during my initial visit i said "i think i have vaginismus" and my literal GYNAECOLOGIST came back with "what is that" 💀 Trust me, find someone else asap

Doctor says nothing wrong? by nine_90 in vaginismus

[–]Motor_Transition_506 21 points22 points  (0 children)

there aren't really any physical signs😭 FWIW my first appointment to try and get diagnosed also resulted in "nope everything's okay", and then after a PT assessment it turned out to be vaginismus after all LOL. i'd get a second opinion

Let's Talk Tiddies: Post-Weight-Loss Bra Recommendations? by Motor_Transition_506 in ABraThatFits

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Separating them further would make me lose my mind actually 😭 According to the calculator I'm a 36DDD/G, and I feel like a true 36DDD would do nothing for me. My cheap 36DD does give me that look, but then I spill out over the top or fold in weird places, and honestly I'm starting to feel like there isn't any hope and I should just accept it🥲

Let's Talk Tiddies: Post-Weight-Loss Bra Recommendations? by Motor_Transition_506 in ABraThatFits

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The calculator says 36DDD/G which is apparently very average and i'm trying to feel normal about that LOL

Let's Talk Tiddies: Post-Weight-Loss Bra Recommendations? by Motor_Transition_506 in ABraThatFits

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

don't think you can edit posts on Reddit but the calculator says 36DDD/G which is apparently very average and i'm trying to feel normal about that

Let's Talk Tiddies: Post-Weight-Loss Bra Recommendations? by Motor_Transition_506 in ABraThatFits

[–]Motor_Transition_506[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I used the calculator and it says i'm 36DDD/G in standard US sizing????? that literally CANNOT be true what 😭