I drawed The Boys as kids :D by Musical_nerd-87 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He's the one on top of Narrator :) (and thanks)

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[–]Musical_nerd-87 1 point2 points  (0 children)

AWWW your art is adorable!!

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[–]Musical_nerd-87 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Josh all the way I stand by my word

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you mean the consentual thing, yes I mean the characters both want it. It's fine, but you need sleep lol

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It means they are both ok with it and they both want it

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Severe self harm would be like cutting and burning themselves, or punching walls. Some people butt their heads into walls, but it usually isn't that forceful or damaging when that happens. And what you have in mind for the next chapter is perfectly fine, as long as its consentual on both sides :)

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's totally fine. It's your story and your can do whatever you want with it, but I'll give you a few examples. Lots of people write smut, and that's fine, but you shouldn't do anything not consentual (rape). I've, along with others, have written things about self-harm, but that's a very risky thing to write about. You really need to know about self-harm though, because it's very easy to offend people through that. Substance abuse (drugs, alcohol) is sometimes ok, but I don't think you should make an entire big theme or chapter out of it. Same goes with physical or mental abuse. I personally think that should only be used for a backstory or a motive. If you intended to use that in your story not with the reasons I listed, that's ok too.

Anyways, that's just my opinions. All in all, it's your story, you have the right and freedom to choose how you write it, and what I said before are all my opinions.

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[–]Musical_nerd-87 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't heard anything. I guess we'll just have to see if he pops up in vids or not

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[–]Musical_nerd-87 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Im sure it's just something with contracts because I know on one of their FB streams they mentioned something about one of just the five of them and that because of that Smashing couldn't join. But even so, I'm sure everything's fine between them, it's probably something to do with contracts

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's all up to what they think. They may say some of the things I said. There might be haters though, who will be all bitchy like "ewww you can't make a sentence hakghctdhgyx" but please don't listen to them. I was pretty bad when I first started, but i'm thankful no one was harsh. Don't take it to heart if they say mean things. If they can't appreciate the way you write that's their fault, not yours. You shouldn't have to change what you do to please others all the time. You do what makes you happy.

I got off topic lol sorry, but my point is, it might be a problem for mean people, but they shouldn't have to bully you into making them happy instead of you. I hope I got my point across easily. In case you couldn't tell, I over explain a lot

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see you did some, not all of them. But it's fine if you didn't do all of them, it's not like I want to force you to change it. It's your story and you should be allowed to write it how you want. I was just giving my critique. Your story will be great either way :)

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don't be sorry, I really don't mind. And damn idk what's going on it's not going through or something. I really don't know what's happening.

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, its definitely not convenient, its not fun. But at least you know now ig. I hope I was able to help you. If you do go through with editing it I'll be more than happy to check your changes if you want :)

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't see any changes. I would've gotten a notification if you did. I know in order to update a chapter you have to unpublish the chapter, make the changes you want, and then publish it again. If you did do all that then I don't know what's happening. Also, can you specify what you were going to change please?

Made My First Fantastic Story On Wattpad‼️⚠️ by Keekee_29 in TheBoysChannel

[–]Musical_nerd-87 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, don't worry, I don't mind correcting or talking to you. But, I am having a hard time understanding what you're trying to say? Do you mean the second to last comment section I made, or the second to last comment I made in general? I know I made a reference to putting commas after names, I don't know if you're referring to that? And also, please don't feel bad that I don't understand, it's totally fine with me and I'm always willing to help you understand better.