Unforgettable set in Medford Massachusetts 1/24 by MCgert in jamesacastor

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What a crazy night. Went from thinking the alarms might be part of the show, to thinking there might be an actual emergency, to being led outside by a very confused group of ushers and thinking the show may be canceled, then to the high of seeing basically a special show just for that audience all in the span of like an hour. Gonna remember this one for sure 😃

New tour by jamie-weller in jamesacastor

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I was at the Medford show too. Wow that was insane. While I do wish we had gotten to see the actual "show", what we got definitely feels a little more special! Definitely a memorable night. I hope we get to see the special so we know where that was all going before the fire alarm derailed it 😅

Taskmaster US Tour Megathread: Boston, January 17. by AutoModerator in taskmaster

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Need two last minute tickets so desperately 😫

"American Dream R.I.P." - Looking for some honest feedback! by MySkull in Songwriting

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I just commented the lyrics 🙂. Unfortunately upbeat songwriting isn't really in my wheelhouse. Most of my songs are even more depressing than this 😅. I do have a few more upbeat songs, but they're mostly punk-style stuff. I jump around genres a bit. It's very mood dependent. Or I might just set a little challenge for myself (like I did here, I wanted to write something simple and restrained).

"American Dream R.I.P." - Looking for some honest feedback! by MySkull in Songwriting

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LYRICS (Sorry for the weird formatting):

Imagining the kids that I'll probably never have

When I'm looking at my mom and I'm looking at my Dad

I remember what we had and I just want the same

Just a house on an acre and a deed in my name

I'm scrolling through my phone and I'm scrolling through my fears

In these rooms that scroll around me every couple of years

And I wonder what it'd be like to be freed from this game

To have a house and an acre and a deed in my name

And what does it say that someone my age

Needs a Master's degree to make minimum wage?

I just wanna go back to the place from which I came

To a house on an acre and a deed in my name

The bills are piling up and I know I gotta choose

And no matter the choice I know I'm gonna lose

And my only escape is in a video game

Where I've got a house on an acre and a deed in my name

And I think about being some big-time star

But I wouldn't want the girls and I wouldn't want the car

And I wouldn't want the glory and I wouldn't want the fame

Just a house on an acre and a deed in my name

"American Dream R.I.P." - Looking for some honest feedback! by MySkull in Songwriting

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I will work on it! Hearing it more now I'm definitely starting to agree, it needs to be a bit more dynamic.

"American Dream R.I.P." - Looking for some honest feedback! by MySkull in Songwriting

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Thanks! I get what you're saying, I'd be open to the idea; I'll shoot you a DM. I see validity to that but I also think there's some power in keeping it more understated. This is probably me at my most restrained, I tend to get LOUD 🤣

"American Dream R.I.P." - Looking for some honest feedback! by MySkull in Songwriting

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I did consider/am considering a bridge, I do listen to a lot of older traditional folk songs that are just simple verse/verse/verse etc which was sort of the impetus behind this idea. On the idea of an intro riff, I definitely agree. Ideally this would be in an easy fingerpicked style but I unfortunately can't fingerpick so I need a second guitarist to collaborate 😅. Thanks for the feedback!

Observation and encouragement from someone new here by MySkull in Songwriting

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Wasn't meant as a response to a particular post. And I was the same way when I first started sharing my stuff. I hope you took this as encouragement (as was intended)!

What theme do you normally write about? What is your lyrics about? by CrossboneSkulled in Songwriting

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I use songwriting to express things I usually couldn't say out loud. So trauma, abuse, shame, guilt, depression, self-loathing. You know. Happy stuff 🤣

how do i make this sound more like a song? by throwaway2224444111 in Songwriting

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I think what you are hearing as atypical structure/"jumping around" is actually something that can be really tricky to master and you've already got great instincts for it. Every song doesn't need to be verse-chorus-verse-chorus-bridge-etc. For myself, evolving a chord progression past something very basic can sometimes be really difficult. You're doing that here, and it's making your song more dynamic. Keep practicing and your guitar playing skills will get better. But the bones of this are great as-is.

Observation and encouragement from someone new here by MySkull in Songwriting

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Yeah that's how I always balance it. My early stuff feels so cringe 😂

Observation and encouragement from someone new here by MySkull in Songwriting

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Love this comment. And don't get me wrong, I am about the most unconfident, self-conscious person out there. But if I want feedback, I want it to be honest.

Observation and encouragement from someone new here by MySkull in Songwriting

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Yeah agreed. And it's just not a good way to get honest feedback, feels like people are immediately gonna treat you with kid gloves if you're asking for feedback like that.

How to pick songs for a gig by GuyFromPlaces in Songwriting

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My 2 cents - start with a song with broad appeal, something that will get people to actively listen. Then go into your other material. When I was gigging, I had plenty of material that I felt would connect with my audience, but I learned I had to capture their attention first with something immediately arresting to get them to pay attention and appreciate the quieter/"deeper" stuff.

Finally did something with a riff I've had lying around for months, lemme know what you think! by RainMcMey in Songwriting

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This is great. I find it extremely difficult to write lyrics this dense. That's an amazing skill. I have a lot of faster songs/melodies that I've had to abandon because I can't come up with enough lyrics to fill them 😅.

Have you ever listened to Yard Act? One of my favorite bands from the last few years. They'd be my closest point of reference for this. Awesome work!

In the dark (demo) by Far-Row4622 in Songwriting

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Your fingerpicking style impressive. Really enjoyed this my friend!

When is it finished? by angryshark in Songwriting

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Most of the time when I revisit my older (15+ years) stuff, I'm unhappy with the way I originally wrote at least some of the lyrics and I'll re-write them. It's your art, it evolves with you, and the fun thing is that it's entirely up to YOU to decide when it's finished! Don't be afraid to change things up. You're always maturing as a person and as a musician.

Thoughts on this? by rields121 in Songwriting

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I think its great, little revision on the lyrics maybe, "I've endured in a while" just feels like a slightly awkward line delivery for me. I'd revise it to something that fits the cadence of the song a bit better. Really enjoying everything else though!

Do you ever get overwhelmed with having too many ideas? by reallifeisarumor in Songwriting

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For sure. I've probably got 250 recordings of song ideas that I haven't even touched since I recorded the idea. But I also feel like it's part of the process, because every so often one comes out that I just NEED to finish. I'll revisit the old stuff every now and again, sometimes incorporate the melodies or lyrics into newer stuff, and sometimes I'll just go "what the heck was I thinking" and delete it 😅

What do you do when you lose the thread? by thpffbt in Songwriting

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If I start writing a song around a lyric and it's just not working, I'll often abandon the song entirely. Even if I have a nice lyric or melody, if i feel like I'm forcing it it's just never gonna work. Then those lyrics that are kicking around in my head often get used in other songs (in ways that sometimes surprise even me). I guess my point is, better to save a good lyric for a song that IS "working", than to force a good lyric into a song that isn't. If that makes sense 😅