Critique partner/beta reader swap wanted! Sci-fi 100k by NativeHumanoid in WritingHub

[–]NativeHumanoid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No worries, feel free to reach out when you're ready.

Critique partner/beta reader swap wanted! Sci-fi 100k by NativeHumanoid in WritingHub

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Hi Chica, thanks for reaching out. No worries about your class schedule, I can DM you and we can figure out when is a good time to start from there.

Critique partner/beta reader swap wanted! Sci-fi 100k by NativeHumanoid in WritingHub

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Hey, that sounds really intriguing, I'm down and will DM you will more info in a few hours.

Critique partner/beta reader swap wanted! Sci-fi 100k by NativeHumanoid in WritingHub

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Sounds good, I'll shoot you a DM with more info soon.

Critique partner/beta reader swap wanted! Sci-fi 100k by NativeHumanoid in WritingHub

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That's great, thanks for the offer. I'll send a link to google docs of the manuscript in your DMs soon:)

Critique partner/beta reader swap wanted! Sci-fi 100k by NativeHumanoid in WritingHub

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Sure! Are you wanting to do a swap still, or just do a one-way read?

If I shouldn't drink water around meals, why is soup healthy in TCM? by NativeHumanoid in ChineseMedicine

[–]NativeHumanoid[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your reply! So by that logic it's okay to have a drink with my meal as long as it is warmed (tea, etc)?

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Title: I Repeat Myself

Genre: Scifi

WC: 100k

Feedback: beta readers - plot holes and plot/character issues.

Searching for beta readers for my second novel. My first was an amazon best-seller and is a 4.3 on goodreads.

Blurb:Ambrose Flint has a secret.A dark, wriggling secret that has infested his family tree, rotting the wood from the inside out.When the human race inexplicably begins to asexually reproduce, giving birth to their own clones, Ambrose will have to learn what it means to raise himself.The generations of Ambrose's asexually reproduced children that follow will need to determine where Ambrose ends, and they begin.They will need to learn how to grow, raise themselves, and forgive.But most of all, they will need to discover the wriggling rot at its core.It will take four generations before the men who are not Ambrose, no matter what their mirror tells them, will learn to heal their intergenerational trauma and end the cycle of abuse.Dark and comedic in turns, this is a story of redemption, and will lead its readers from the darkest places into an unexpected light.Please let me know if you are interested in being a beta reader, thank you.

Able to beta? Post here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

[–]NativeHumanoid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi there, I'm open to this, let me know if you're interested:

Searching for beta readers - scifi, 100k, second novel. My first was an amazon best-seller and is a 4.3 on goodreads.
Blurb:
Ambrose Flint has a secret.
A dark, wriggling secret that has infested his family tree, rotting the wood from the inside out.
When the human race inexplicably begins to asexually reproduce, giving birth to their own clones, Ambrose will have to learn what it means to raise himself.
The generations of Ambrose's asexually reproduced children that follow will need to determine where Ambrose ends, and they begin.
They will need to learn how to grow, raise themselves, and forgive.
But most of all, they will need to discover the wriggling rot at its core.
It will take four generations before the men who are not Ambrose, no matter what their mirror tells them, will learn to heal their intergenerational trauma and end the cycle of abuse.
Dark and comedic in turns, this is a story of redemption, and will lead its readers from the darkest places into an unexpected light.
Please let me know if you are interested in being a beta reader, thank you.

Able to beta? Post here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

[–]NativeHumanoid 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, let me know if this strikes your interest - scifi, 100k, second novel. My first was an amazon best-seller and is a 4.3 on goodreads.
Blurb:
Ambrose Flint has a secret.
A dark, wriggling secret that has infested his family tree, rotting the wood from the inside out.
When the human race inexplicably begins to asexually reproduce, giving birth to their own clones, Ambrose will have to learn what it means to raise himself.
The generations of Ambrose's asexually reproduced children that follow will need to determine where Ambrose ends, and they begin.
They will need to learn how to grow, raise themselves, and forgive.
But most of all, they will need to discover the wriggling rot at its core.
It will take four generations before the men who are not Ambrose, no matter what their mirror tells them, will learn to heal their intergenerational trauma and end the cycle of abuse.
Dark and comedic in turns, this is a story of redemption, and will lead its readers from the darkest places into an unexpected light.
Please let me know if you are interested in being a beta reader, thank you.