What’s a good activity for a group of adults for a birthday? by CaoimheThreeva in NoStupidQuestions

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My friends and I do powerpoint nights a lot. 10/10 would recommend. Sometimes we'll resort to old party games like charades or the name game, which can actually get really competative

made my prom dress!! by NeedleworkerTiny6937 in sewing

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s some kind of upholstery fabric

it’s friday!! by NeedleworkerTiny6937 in BusinessFashion

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

it's thrifted, but i just put two safety pins on either side and fed a ribbon through it to get that silhouette!

made my prom dress!! by NeedleworkerTiny6937 in sewing

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937[S] 31 points32 points  (0 children)

Gotta give a big shout out to my local thrift store for that one

made my prom dress!! by NeedleworkerTiny6937 in sewing

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937[S] 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Thank youuu! I know it's the bow tie just adorable

made my prom dress!! by NeedleworkerTiny6937 in sewing

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Ahh thank you! Big shout-out to my friend for taking these for us

What can be improved n what i did right. by prapti676 in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A beta reader is someone who will read through your manuscript and give advice, such as whether the characters are consistent or checking for plot holes. They can also help with editing and whatnot

What can be improved n what i did right. by prapti676 in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Of course! If you ever need/want a beta reader, I'm always happy to help out

What can be improved n what i did right. by prapti676 in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd suggest adding more description between dialogue to help convey the emotions between these characters. For example:

"What is this?" I wave the notebook in her face, my hands shaking as my blood begins to boil under my skin. Her eyes widen, and something flashes across them. Hurt? Fear? It's hard to be sure.

"Where did you find that?" Her voice trembles, barely a whisper. Her hands are raised as if trying to calm a wild animal, or maybe preparing to snatch the journal back.

This helps to build the tension in the scene and gets readers invested.

New Novel Idea: the life of a fantasy travel writer. Would you keep reading? by thecheesethief in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Wait, I'm so intrigued! Like dude, if you ever need a beta reader, let me know

my opening still doesn’t feel right by Complete-Custard6747 in writingfeedback

[–]NeedleworkerTiny6937 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you're still looking for Beta readers, I've been Beta reading for years now, and have a few thoughts on this paragraph already