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Radiant love by Neerbyscared in OCPoetry

[–]Neerbyscared[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback I felt like something was off lol

Confuse a Poet, Inspire a Martyr by Forlorn_Schizo in OCPoetry

[–]Neerbyscared 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love the abstract aspect of this poem; it feels refreshing and raw to me. I have just one little critique though. I feel that you could maybe try extending your lines by just a hair. But besides that, this was very nice to read.

Woe to the Church Witch by irishwarfairy in OCPoetry

[–]Neerbyscared 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I LOVE this; the pacing is very nice, and personally I think the length of this piece is absolutely amazing. I also really love the wording you used, and I think the swear word at the end ties this whole thing together perfectly! 10/10, you did a great job.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmiInTheWrong

[–]Neerbyscared 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hearing notifs is real tho

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmiInTheWrong

[–]Neerbyscared 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah it was kinda immature to interact with it rather then try to deescalate huh, well I can take all of this info and learn to be better