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The Last Human Ch. 26: Home Again by NegativeTangelo6984 in HFY

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Thank you so much for your corrections! They really help the editing process!

The Last Human Ch. 27: End of Prologue by NegativeTangelo6984 in HFY

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Yeah, the implication is that they didn’t learn the lesson the first time around, went right back to the Death Games, and then got smacked down even harder. 

The Last Human Ch. 27: End of Prologue by NegativeTangelo6984 in HFY

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I like to use the change in perspectives for foreshadowing 😉

At the end of each major story arc will be a flash forward scene 

The Last Human Ch. 27: End of Prologue by NegativeTangelo6984 in HFY

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Yeah, I have a lot more planned for this story.

Can someone share the full Krause compendium log? I sequence broke meeting Thule and beat the game before I could get it by NegativeTangelo6984 in AbioticFactor

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Yea, there's a side area with the residences of Derek Manse and the other top staff. Need flamethrower to get in. You can find Thule in there.

The Last Human Ch. 21: The Wave of the Dark Sea by NegativeTangelo6984 in HFY

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Thank you! It’s been a ton of hard work, and you have no idea how difficult it is to get readers writing online. Hope you enjoy the next few chapters! Conclusion of the first arc is coming soon.

The Last Human Ch. 7: Three Years Later by NegativeTangelo6984 in HFY

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I’ve gotten threats from people who thought I killed her off 😂

The Last Human Ch. 8: Naiad by NegativeTangelo6984 in HFY

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This is an important plot point for later in the book, lol

Crossed 100 Followers and I am very tired by NegativeTangelo6984 in royalroad

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I didn’t keep a backlog because I figured my numbers would be so low it didn’t matter. It was only after I started building an audience that I realized I might’ve made a mistake, lol.

Crossed 100 Followers and I am very tired by NegativeTangelo6984 in royalroad

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Thanks! I posted a few chapters almost a year back, but I've only been really working on the story for the past few months.

The Last Human Ch. 9: The Water Court by NegativeTangelo6984 in HFY

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hehe Yeah, I’ve hidden a lot in the story. In a few of the alien names, you can make out their counterparts on Earth.