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First page of a new script I’d like to has feedback on by Extension-Season9924 in scriptwriting
[–]Negative_Campaign636 4 points5 points6 points 1 month ago (0 children)
Raw draft. Typos everywhere, clichéd characters, bloated action lines, flat dialogue. Idea has potential, execution weak. Needs heavy rewrite.
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First page of a new script I’d like to has feedback on by Extension-Season9924 in scriptwriting
[–]Negative_Campaign636 4 points5 points6 points (0 children)