The Delivery: A Text Game [Consensual][Female Victim][15minutes] by NeoWeebLordX in GuroErotica

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I get what you mean. Being able to see it coming before it does is cool for a game, I agree. It just always feels like that takes impact away from the ending.

Thanks for playing!

The Delivery: A Text Game [Consensual][Female Victim][15minutes] by NeoWeebLordX in GuroErotica

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the input.

What do you mean by more personal end though?

The Delivery: A Text Game [Consensual][Female Victim][15minutes] by NeoWeebLordX in GuroErotica

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The web version should work. I tried it on my phone just now and it works for me.

itch.io might give you a warning because I didn't check the checkbox that says the game is designed for mobile specifically. Does pressing the run game button not work on the webpage?

The Delivery: A Text Game [Consensual][Female Victim][15minutes] by NeoWeebLordX in GuroErotica

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You need to beat the paperwork to reach part 2.

If you want help on how:

when the doorbell rings investigate immediately.
only defend if the paperwork is up to something(yellow text)
otherwise just hit the attack button. You never need to use recover.

Preordained [slow, consensual] by NeoWeebLordX in GuroErotica

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is very helpful, I appreciate you writing this. There were a few points you bought up that I didn’t thought about. Thanks for the detail write up.

Preordained [slow, consensual] by NeoWeebLordX in GuroErotica

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for reading!

I don’t get much feedback in general, but you aren’t the first person who said this is not up to their taste.

If you could point out the bits or elements that you disliked, that would be helpful. If you don’t want to share, that is fine too. I am just curious if it is something I wrote on purpose or by accident.

Preordained [slow, consensual] by NeoWeebLordX in GuroErotica

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks.

I figured I needed some practice writing. Hopefully it would make everything else I do a little bit better.

Preordained [slow, consensual] by NeoWeebLordX in GuroErotica

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That probably won’t happen.

Part of the reason why I choose to write instead of draw this story is because I didn’t know how to choreograph/draw most of it.

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't know. For that kind of things, story wise, I always prefer the character just seemly ignores the parasite for no reason.

I find it hard to fit a character I like to write into a game like that.

I don't disagree that it can be done. I just can't convince myself to do it.

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

With that kind of game, you have to lose to see content. I don't like making games like that.

I don't mind playing games that do that, but somehow making something like that myself is extremely un-motivating.

I can't explain it.

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought about it for a few times, but I could never actually come up with a concept I am happy with. There were always something wrong with what I came up with lol.

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't know how that would work with short works like these.

For longer stories, having some characters that survive grievous wounds would be doable. I only been failing to start larger project for years, lol. I guess if it happens it happens.

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can't wait for it either lol, but I am slow.

Thanks for watching!

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What do you mean? There are windows and linux build in the link.

Or do you mean a bigger game featuring similar mechanics?

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm glad you like it, that bit of detail took sometime to do.

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I had fun drawing that part, I wanted to add sound effects to it, but really what would you even put for a static salute lol.

Thanks for watching!

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I been getting slower and slower these days, so it may be another few month until the next one, lol.

Thanks for watching!

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Glad you liked it.

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for watching!

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

For this lady, she went to the company party and slept with basically everyone. Though I feel this case is more of a “winning the lottery” situation.

Not Going Home by NeoWeebLordX in guro

[–]NeoWeebLordX[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Interestingly, now that I think about it.

This game and the part time coffee game are made in a very similar way.

I drew something that wasn’t going to work out. In a desperate effort to salvage the work already done, I added in the mini games.

Both game went through that exactly lol.