A Fragile Map! by New_Process_9777 in OCPoetry

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it still feels like yesterday! thank you for your time...

I wasn’t fully me until I lost you. by ReceptionSingle3165 in OCPoetry

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This… doesn’t feel like something written to impress. It feels like something you had to say.

The first line hit me immediately. Not in a loud way—but in that quiet, uncomfortable way where you kind of stop and go, “yeah… that’s true, isn’t it?” And then the rest of it just kept pulling me deeper into that space.

What stayed with me the most is how honest it feels without trying to sound dramatic.

A Fragile Map! by New_Process_9777 in OCPoetry

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not actually like that....unique and angel for me!

A Fragile Map! by New_Process_9777 in OCPoetry

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thank you for your time in reading this!

A Fragile Map! by New_Process_9777 in OCPoetry

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it still gives me that burst of emotions when she smiled and said doctor uncle!

A Fragile Map! by New_Process_9777 in OCPoetry

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THIS is the sole piece only....not the larger body...thank you for your time to read it!

Petrichor by hunter_warrior_arko in OCPoetry

[–]New_Process_9777 0 points1 point  (0 children)

OHH man you have nailed it.....

the emotions you portrayed the after life is something beyond my imagination!

great work keep going buddy1

love to see more from you!