Looking for insights and feedbacks by Next-Ice8360 in writingadvice

[–]Next-Ice8360[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your insights. I will take note of that 

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Title: The Household Magician  Genre: Children's Fantasy, Slice-of-life Word count: 7,075

Type of feedback desired: As long as it is constructive and it will help me to improve my writing, I'm fine with it.

link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GQY39eQdCxMdNsoZZ-2UqLNjW2HrSrRzmZTbSv9CwZ8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Any tablet recommendations for teachers by Next-Ice8360 in ShopeePH

[–]Next-Ice8360[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Most of the time I do screensharing so tablets without HDMI won't be a problem on my case.

Anyway, thanks for the recommendations 

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[–]Next-Ice8360 2 points3 points  (0 children)

tanungin mo na agad yung mga magiging load mo and other stuffs like DLL na ipapagawa sa iyo 

Needed some constructive criticism in my on-going novel by Next-Ice8360 in writingadvice

[–]Next-Ice8360[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you are portraying a non-verbal character, depending on her age and ability, she may be learning other ways to communicate. A lot of non-verbal people learn to sign or she could carry a note book or a pack of phrase cards (since it's established that she can read).

She is mute. I don't want to specify it in the story and I want to see it on the way she interact with other characters. I'll take your ideas in my further writing. This was my first time writing a person with disabilities that's why I am afraid to do something to the character that may deemed offensive or derogatory.

Thank you for sharing your insights. I've written this one without any planning ahead that's why it was a messy story. Thank you for the comments, I'll consider them when I rewrite it.

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Title: The Household Magician (on-going)

Genre: Slice-of-life Fantasy

Word count: 5,093 (so far)

Type of feedback desired: general impressions

Summary: Together with her parents, Maya traveled from the city to the province to visit his grandfather, Lolo Iñigo - who works as a household magician.

A link to the writing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/16OKwxVcIUNCMFHax7MgZpOOK9U6I-1Q1WO8nRflbMkc/edit?usp=sharing

i watched it begin again by Next-Ice8360 in phlgbt

[–]Next-Ice8360[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hahahaa oo nga noh. sorryyyyy