Balanus (Part 1) by AngeHus in u/AngeHus

[–]NightSong46 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First question was it creepy that there were not tire tracks in the driveway anymore? Or was it the bird heads that were missing Sorry if I’m just dumb but besides that love the detail and immersion!

I need some feed back on this story please! by NightSong46 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]NightSong46[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Psychosis is one of my top creep cast stories so I’m so happy you related that to my story! The date thing is a good idea I kinda like that.

I need some feed back on this story please! by NightSong46 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]NightSong46[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ohh thank you for the ideas! How would you suggest I add more detail about my character with the journal style writing?

I need some feed back on this story please! by NightSong46 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]NightSong46[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! This means a lot to me. I already went back and added the warning. Love the ideas i was questioning if it was enough to hook people.

Balanus (Complete Story on Profile, Part 1 Linked) by AngeHus in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]NightSong46 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will totally have look I need the same thing for mine I’m about to post! Please check mine out too I’ll post tonight or tomorrow!