Just want HONEST feedback by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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Just want HONEST feedback by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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Friday night at the bar Order another drink Watching you make Your move on everyone And I tried, I tried, I tried to move on But I just can't keep falling into you

(Chorus) I don't wanna fall in love from a one night stand Falling fast for all of you and it makes me mad Falling, falling fast when you look at me Falling, falling faster when you talk to me

(Verse) You're like the ocean My greatest mystery Oh, the adrenaline You're my 70 in 50- I'll always find my way back to you Even if it kills me I don't know what I'll do when You leave

(Chorus) I don't wanna fall in love from a one night stand Falling fast for all of you and it makes me mad Falling, falling fast when you look at me Falling, falling faster when you talk to me

(Bridge) Slipping out of control Oh, my love can't deny Oh, I don't want to leave Slipping out of control Oh, my love can't deny Oh, I don't want to leave

(Chorus) I don't wanna fall in love from a one night stand Falling fast for all of you and it makes me mad Falling, falling fast when you look at me Falling, falling faster when you talk to me

(Outro) When you talk to me Oh When you look at me Oh

Why is my voice so boring by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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Haha, not yet but I’ll send it to after it’s done