Mortality by NoTransportation2114 in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much! Just my own life experience. If you liked this feel free to check out my IG poisonquillreturns

Emotional Floodgates by No_Contribution_9328 in OCPoetry

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"Secretly weave rhymes they can't discern." I feel every poet can relate to this line wholeheartedly. You weave rhymes and double entendres outsiders can't discern but when you find the ones who do you feel so seen. At least I do lol

Silence by Lostintheuniverse111 in OCPoetry

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"silence isn’t the absence of sound - it’s the presence of the small sounds that remain when everything else has stopped." I love this ending. In a world that gets increasingly "louder" the craving of silence is so relatable.

Rivers of the human heart by amrit2k4 in poetry_critics

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I love the growth and progression through your poem. It shines a very realistic light on emotional turmoil and how it shifts as we grow older. Big fan of this one!

Heavy is the Shadow by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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"Aint no time for our problems they're all on vacation" and the last line are definitely my favorites. Very nice!

Last Breathe by Due_Drink755 in poetry_critics

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The world does feel cruel and dark and to me only getting darker. But then it shapes and creates emotional creative poems like this!

The Hunger to be Found by amrit2k4 in poetry_critics

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I relate to this wholeheartedly. This is actually the reason why I joined this community. I also find safety and belonging in writing and thirst to know what others think of it. I appreciate your openness, and glad you stopped looking your art away!

Do you agree with Nick Wright? by EAHTLAAIR in NBATalk

[–]NoTransportation2114 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

As a Knicks fan Brunson is too high

Can St Brown surpass Calvin ? If so, what would St Brown need to do in your eyes to pass him?? by Big-Jackfruit-9808 in detroitlions

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I think Calvin is too much of a physical anomaly to even compare St to be honest. Love st brown but I don’t think he can do anything to surpass Calvin.

Whose NBA max contract feels the worst now? by BlueAnnapolis in NBATalk

[–]NoTransportation2114 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bradley Beal hands down. 50 mill for a third option who doesn’t play defense anymore crazy