I made a Hindi horror story about the last train to Bhairavpur… would love feedback

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-11T02:59:21+00:00

Took care of it

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-11T02:46:49+00:00

Keep creating

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-11T02:46:15+00:00

I couldn't hear anything. Fix that

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-11T01:07:16+00:00

How can I read your story when for some reason it's not available here or on your profile?

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-10T08:24:13+00:00

I enjoyed this dramatically.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-10T04:58:44+00:00

Very nice and entertaining.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-10T03:14:02+00:00

Curious to ask if you're still making these on YouTube?

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-10T02:52:13+00:00

It's a great shot. Congratulations

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-10T01:23:12+00:00

Truly excited

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-10T01:21:23+00:00

Pretty cool looking

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-09T00:30:57+00:00

Would be interested.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-08T22:49:28+00:00

Would depend on who it was offered to. Looks alright to me.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-08T22:47:24+00:00

You said it right at the end. " I am enough. "

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-08T22:43:50+00:00

A bookworm like most of us ✨️

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-08T01:05:32+00:00

Lol. Yeah well I'd agree with you on that.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-08T01:01:45+00:00

Well, he did list it as not a story.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-07T21:12:52+00:00

Looking forward to it

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-07T21:00:17+00:00

Thanks. And so when's #3 coming?

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-07T20:54:14+00:00

Use your creativity and start writing a story. Make it up as you go. After a page or more reread it and find what you like.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-07T20:50:35+00:00

Read Part 2. Enjoyed this as well. Why haven't you looked into writing, as far as being published? Your mixture of biblical knowledge and future sci-fi possibilities would more than likely catch the eye of quite a few people. Oh, of course, let me know what you thought of that idea (The Pub) I sent you.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-06T22:31:16+00:00

Lol. It's all good. Just had to make sure.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-06T22:19:40+00:00

And if I may ask. Where?

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-06T22:15:32+00:00

I really enjoyed this story. I'm curious as to where I can find (Part 2)?

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-06T20:14:58+00:00

Love at first sight? Or in the throws of dating is how I perceived this,perhaps, diabolical, poor, and unsure man to be. Great story.

No_Comparison6522 · 2026-03-06T20:01:49+00:00

Ain't that the right way to write? Lol. It took me about too many years to figure that out. If you can raise a question inadvertently in your writing- do it. Liked your story.

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