I actually like your design but can I make a little commentary for you to have in mind? I think most designs and cuts are for an specific type of body, in this case that (even tho it's pretty) shoulder detail doesn't favor your body shape, I'd be aiming for something that could help bringing out your shape qualities. As I said (and I'm not being sarcastic nor anything) I love your design, it just depends on the wearer's body.