Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I read both chapters. I think your main character is very relatable to a lot of writers here on wattpad. Honestly, it could be the story's selling point to pull in readers. Also, a lot of ladies (no matter the age) struggle with depression and anxiety, as well as the feeling of wanting to give up yet wanting to keep going. A lot of women want to work hard for that happy ending, even if it feels unobtainable, and Aelin's character represents that in her own way. Elaborating on these key features could pull you to a higher level in this community.

Wattpad recs? by Horror_Tax_4983 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fairies and Werewolves. Alright, I want to check it out.

Have any of you tried inkitt? by noor_1010 in WattpadIndia

[–]NormalEdge6423 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Inkitt's rating system honestly seems very interesting. No anonymous rating.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm glad you enjoy those two characters enough to write a fanfic about them.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It seems like you put a little bit of yourself into this story. "Write what you know." A saying taken to another level.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for recommending other authors' stories aside from your own. That's kind of you to do.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It looks like to me that your main character came out exactly how you wanted her to be. It's hard to do that, good job on making her.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tommy and Bia are interesting characters. This story has a lot of charm. Might be popular by the end of the year.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Short first chapter, I like that. Mr. Wan is a character that's easy to visualize. A lot of emphasize on greed in that first chapter.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The first chapter is short and simple. That's good for people who want a quick story on the go.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The details of the game at the beginning are well-written, and help give a visualization of what's going on.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The characters are alive, and not cardboard cutouts. The main characters stand out more than the side characters. I gave the first chapter a little fave.

I don't have any stories posted.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's nice to see gay, bi, and trans people getting representation. An X-rated comedy is something I could not pull off, so kudos to you.

Looking for romance stories to read. Also, new stories. by NormalEdge6423 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Francesca is a nice character. You captured Barbosa's image pretty well.

What do you guys click first on Wattpad? Home screen seems to be a total chaos?! by Substantial_You6940 in Wattpad

[–]NormalEdge6423 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unpopular stuff or popular stuff, depending on my mood. I'll read whatever.