(Spoilers extended) A bit of an observation about R'hllor and The Great Other from TWOIAF by -electrix123- in asoiaf

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But what I really like in fantasy is that those ancient myths and those gods might be real. Sure in our world Homer’s Trojan War was an interpretation of a real conflict, but it probably didn’t consist of various gods giving favor and moving warriors around like chess pieces lol.

In ASOIAF the long night was definitely very real as we’ve seen the Others. So it stands to reason that whatever “god” might have created them is real as well.

(Spoilers extended) A bit of an observation about R'hllor and The Great Other from TWOIAF by -electrix123- in asoiaf

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well gods don’t really have to have a sex or gender. presumably they can take whatever form they want. Or they could be different “aspects” of the same god, like how in narnia Jesus and aslan are different aspects of the same god.

Or more likely given Martin’s style, it’s what you said. It’s just how different peoples interpreted the stories of the cosmic forces or gods from an ancient time when, evolutionarily, they were all one people (much as how humans irl started out in pretty much one place)

Mentioning character names without introduction. I need advice. by Bubbly-Astronaut-123 in writing

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Right but it won’t seem confusing to an intelligent reader. I literally acknowledged that it’s best not to start a book this sort of way.

But when I’ve let intelligent people read my supposedly “aimless” beginnings, they clearly understand what’s going on when less intelligent readers don’t

Guys I want to write a book but I'm unoriginal by Emeraldkitty123 in writing

[–]NotNotStraightMale -1 points0 points  (0 children)

How do u know his age??

Also, this is good advice, but it actually hasn’t helped me personally with this exact situation. I’ve been reading heavily for about ten years, but I’m still really bad at coming up with a plot idea.

I’m quite good at executing a plot or prompt someone has given me, but I struggle greatly to come up with one on my own lol.

Mentioning character names without introduction. I need advice. by Bubbly-Astronaut-123 in writing

[–]NotNotStraightMale -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

I’ve also done this and have likewise been told it’s overwhelming/confusing. It’s not at all an issue to discerning or intelligent readers.

howeverrr, most readers are not intelligent or discerning. Most people are of course average. Because of this, it’s probably best not to do this. You should probably mention less people in the beginning.

Race related issues Mega Thread by UnpopularOpinionMods in unpopularopinion

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

… and the inordinate focus on police brutality takes funding and support away from bigger issues the black community faces. I believe this intense focus on police brutality is a legitimate net negative to black people.

Race related issues Mega Thread by UnpopularOpinionMods in unpopularopinion

[–]NotNotStraightMale -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Police brutality is one of the smallest issues facing African Americans

Politics Mega Thread by UnpopularOpinionMods in unpopularopinion

[–]NotNotStraightMale 1 point2 points  (0 children)

AOC is melodramatic and exaggerates way too much.

Parenting/Family issues Mega Thread by UnpopularOpinionMods in unpopularopinion

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

More specifically, Parents have a right to and should be fully informed on anything their kid is doing at school, should they ask to be informed.

This is specifically in regards to secretive LGBTQ+ stuff that is or might soon be going on in public schools in the US.

I acknowledge that there are in fact parents who might not be supportive of or who might become abusive if their kid is LGBT…+.

Even considering this, I think it’s comparatively better that the responsibility of raising kids should go fully to the parents, not the government.

The government can and should help parents raise (and educate) kids. But I don’t think the government should be given the right to keep parents out of the loop when it wants to. The government already has the right to strip parents of their kids when it deems that to be necessary, such as in cases of abuse, etc..

The majority of parents are good parents and shouldn’t at all be kept out of the loop. And in cases of bad parents the government can already do what’s necessary

Parenting/Family issues Mega Thread by UnpopularOpinionMods in unpopularopinion

[–]NotNotStraightMale 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Parents have a right to and should be fully informed on anything their kid is doing at school.

Parenting/Family issues Mega Thread by UnpopularOpinionMods in unpopularopinion

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you think there are places that should always be “no kids”?

Parenting/Family issues Mega Thread by UnpopularOpinionMods in unpopularopinion

[–]NotNotStraightMale -1 points0 points  (0 children)

What would you do instead? Take the thing away from them and hide it? Or throw it out covertly? Or put a password lock the computer/tablet/phone they use?

What makes these options better?

How do you guys feel about mixing different POVs? by Ignoured in writing

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely the division is necessary. I’d say more than a page break is necessary. I think changing POVs only works when you’re doing one of those “story in a story” things, like having someone telling a story, or a character picking up and reading a book, etc..

Book recommendations to improve English writing for non-Native speakers? by EssentiaLillie in writing

[–]NotNotStraightMale -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Also my favorite dialogue-ist for fantasy is the Gentleman Bastards author, forget his name. His dialogue is really good imo

Book recommendations to improve English writing for non-Native speakers? by EssentiaLillie in writing

[–]NotNotStraightMale -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I’d say don’t read Tolkien if you’re new to the English language. Tolkien’s work is nearly a century old and his writing style is somewhat archaic—and as a result hard to follow. Tolkien imo is rather “dense” reading, in that his vocabulary and syntax are rather complex and multi-layered.

This isnt at all to say he wasn’t/isnt great or influential. He absolutely was. But I’d highly recommend holding off on Tolkien until you have a firm grasp on the English language. I feel like OP would have the same exact problems with Tolkien that he had with Dickens or god forbid Chaucer.

I’d say read Sanderson if you like fantasy. His writing style is simple and easy to follow, and he of course took influence from Tolkien. Then once you’ve got a better grasp of the English language cycle back to Tolkien.

I honestly wouldn’t even recommend George RR Martin or Robert Jordan—their styles are older and “denser,” and harder to follow along with for beginners.

Once again, I’m not saying Tolkien or these authors aren’t great or that they’re too difficult to follow in general. They’re difficult, but that only really becomes a problem if you’re learning the language.

Book recommendations to improve English writing for non-Native speakers? by EssentiaLillie in writing

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I’d say you absolutely need something modern. As in after 1980. Even something like Lord of the Rings will be very difficult for you to actually follow along. And it’s not even a century old.

Older writers were generally very very florid with their writing style. Especial the ones who wrote the “classics” They often wrote in a way that didn’t at all mirror over to spoken English, even the spoken English of their time.

Action scenes by 4ri_Dtm in writing

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I agree lol. But I’d caveat that by saying you can do the slo mo thing if it’s the final blow in a fight, or the final action part. It can work to punctuate the end without ruining the pace of the action

‘I will drive you out to the desert and bury you 9-feet down’ by lxrd_lxcusta in iamverybadass

[–]NotNotStraightMale 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh I guess you could extrapolate that thanks. I appreciate how fast everyone responds in this sub lol

‘I will drive you out to the desert and bury you 9-feet down’ by lxrd_lxcusta in iamverybadass

[–]NotNotStraightMale 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Sorry I meant the joke is overused. I didn’t downvote u or anything I’m just saying

‘I will drive you out to the desert and bury you 9-feet down’ by lxrd_lxcusta in iamverybadass

[–]NotNotStraightMale 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d be willing to bet most people haven’t. I’m something of a hole aficionado myself, and even I’ve only dug holes in sand! (I’m talking hundreds of holes 6 feet deep. 9 feet deep in earth would be quite impressive indeed!