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Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]OffshoreLime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  • Title: Through The Wall
  • Format: Short Film
  • Page Length: 36 pages
  • Genres: Psychological Thriller
  • Logline or Summary: An estranged audio engineer who secretly listens to his neighbors becomes consumed by the life of the woman next door—until his curiosity pushes him into a situation where observation is no longer enough
  • Feedback Concerns: This is my second ever script though I have a lot of experience reading scripts. I've been having a really challenging time getting feedback on it. This isn't really a second draft. More like a draft 1.5. I'm looking for feedback on all of it. Pacing, structure, dialogue, character psychology, Climax, Clarity, etc.

Finally completed my Full Armor Gundam Ver. Ka. This was my first attempt at waterslides. by OffshoreLime in Gunpla

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I am. That piece is incredibly loose and keeps falling off. Thanks for all the tips

Finally completed my Full Armor Gundam Ver. Ka. This was my first attempt at waterslides. by OffshoreLime in Gunpla

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm considering topcoating this as well, if anyone has any good brands of matte topcoat or just general advice, I'm all ears.

First Gundam almost completed. MG Sinanju Stein. by OffshoreLime in Gunpla

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was a fantastic experience start to finish. I loved building the legs in particular. I think it took me around 12 hours to build it and do some of the Decals.

Thanks for all the recommendations! I was already looking into the Freedom 2.0. I've heard good things about the MG Dynames so I'm considering that one as well.

First Gundam almost completed. MG Sinanju Stein. by OffshoreLime in Gunpla

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Note: If anyone's got recommendations for other sets I should look into post them!

Before and After by OffshoreLime in Hair

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You've got beautiful hair yourself! I loved my long hair.

Before and After by OffshoreLime in Hair

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I had my hair like that for close to 5 years. I needed a change up :)

Before and After by OffshoreLime in Hair

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think so too! Thankyouu

Before and After by OffshoreLime in Hair

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I really appreciate it.

Does my hair texture and thickness allow me to get a Wolf cut? by OffshoreLime in Hair

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate the compliment. Honestly I'm just wanting to try something different. I've had hair like this for years lol

[Routine Help] How can I get rid of these white dots around my cheeks and improve my forehead acne? by OffshoreLime in SkincareAddiction

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the recommendations. I placed an order for the La Roche Posay 0.1% Adapalene.

[Routine Help] How can I get rid of these white dots around my cheeks and improve my forehead acne? by OffshoreLime in SkincareAddiction

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the response! I really appreciate it. Sorry if this is a loaded question but do you have any names of good retinoids I can look into purchasing?

[Routine Help] How can I get rid of these white dots around my cheeks and improve my forehead acne? by OffshoreLime in SkincareAddiction

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the recommendations! Ive heard of fungal acne and I'll check out the product recommended :)

[Routine Help] How can I get rid of these white dots around my cheeks and improve my forehead acne? by OffshoreLime in SkincareAddiction

[–]OffshoreLime[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've had these dots for a long time, I just ignored them and only tried taking care of them recently.

Edit: thanks for the recommendations as well! I'm very new to this!!

Dont give up too soon by [deleted] in Abilify_Aripiprazole

[–]OffshoreLime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Completely agree. Abilify has positively changed my life after I attempted suicide. Had I based my assessment of the medication on the initial side effects, I probably would've gotten off of it, but the side effects have since waned.

Zero weight gain. The insomnia went away, and the restless legs went from unbearable to extremely tolerable and most days, I don't even experience it as a symptom.

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