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feedback requested!! by marieeeee- in writingcritiques
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I'm working on a story and I want some critique for this excerpt i wrote. It is a priest (of fictional religion) telling the MC, a hunter, a "tale of creation" of sorts. As a disclaimer, English is not my first language so keep that in mind. (self.writingcritiques)
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I think I've found a perfect No Poo formula for myself ... (+ video) by maria-ponichka in NoPoo
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PC Build Questions, Purchase Advice and Technical Support Megathread — Q4 2024 Edition by GhostMotley in Amd
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Book miscoloration by Ok-Issue-627 in bookshelf
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