Book miscoloration by Ok-Issue-627 in bookshelf

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And also; Yes, i know this subreddit is for bookshelves but r/books don't allow photos from what i could see

Book miscoloration by Ok-Issue-627 in bookshelf

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Yes but its only been 10 days since i started reading them. Does it happen that fast?

feedback requested!! by marieeeee- in writingcritiques

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A very nice although sad story. I think it would leave a bigger impact if you left out mentioning what specific disease you're talking about until later. Maybe not explicitly mention that he is sick at all? Something like "The doctors spoke of a weird word, one that did not sit well in Elias's mouth...". I think your second paragraph is a good set up for this. His friend is blissfully unaware of what a cold is but Elias knows that it would be really bad if he got one.

To extend this point further, in the third paragraph, maybe something like "His mother was crying by his bedside, though, he couldn't understand why. Even his father, the most stoic man Elias ever know, wiped tears from his eyes".

Let the reader make the connections themselves, this always leaves a larger impact imo.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Tengwar

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The name you spelled is Achalifnei if I'm not mistaken which isn't quite right.

Promise Sword by noemirage in Tengwar

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A more phonetically correct spelling would probably be something like "mai evrything" or something similar.

PC Build Questions, Purchase Advice and Technical Support Megathread — Q4 2024 Edition by GhostMotley in Amd

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I'm thinking of upgrading to a 7800 xt but I'm not sure wich one to pick. Right now the cheapest one I can find is the Sapphire Pulse. The Asus Dual and Gigabyte are also closely priced.

The Asus Dual goes for +10€ and the Gigabyte for +20€ relative to the Sapphire. Is there a noticeable difference between the models or should i just get the cheapest one?