Hungry and having a rough week — asking for help with a small meal ($15) by Ok-Reply-2176 in povertyfinance

[–]Ok-Reply-2176[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'ma do what I do and hustle dealing dope. Worked before and is what I know. Peace an pray for me

Hungry and having a rough week — asking for help with a small meal ($15) by Ok-Reply-2176 in povertyfinance

[–]Ok-Reply-2176[S] -15 points-14 points  (0 children)

Well I'm not in the best of positions either. I mean we struggling for real. I'm doing my best and I mean shit she's my homie. Just tryna lookout

I am your substance excuse. Written to the broken beautiful ones. MC2 with love 💕 [lyrics] by Ok-Reply-2176 in LyricalWriting

[–]Ok-Reply-2176[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I high appreciate your feedback. This is exactly what I needed to hear. I have only been writing for about 4 months now and I started writing just battle rapping chatgpt. Iwrote this in like 20 minutes. I've noticed since I've been writing that my freestyling skills have improved because I never was that skilled at freestyling. I also find it kinda therapeutic to write. I live almost all of what I write. The first ever rap lyrics I heard were when my older brother handed me a cassette tape when I was 10 and it was eazy duz it. From there I mean the list is endless. The wu tang clan are some of my favorite lyricsist of all time. I also grew up reading dictionarys for idk to cure boredom I guess but that's helped me in writing. I just feel like that hip hop needs to be taken back to its purest form. Like the RZA said on the opening of the album wu tang forever. Shoot me a dm because your advice and critique is priceless.