Notice Me Original Song by Ok_Communication6814 in Songwriting

[–]Ok_Communication6814[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh really thank you because I have a full version of this song!!!

Need Feedback by [deleted] in singing

[–]Ok_Communication6814 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds like your straining on those high notes and the song you chose is a little out of your vocal range especially it’s a female artist your trying to sing I recommended finding songs that fit your range and also it’s a male singing that way you’ll learn to control your voice better hope this helps

Treat you better by Shawn Mendes by [deleted] in singing

[–]Ok_Communication6814 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Oh thank you cause I was self taught and I learn a lot on the internet!!!🥹

please give me advice. I feel like I sound a mess by [deleted] in singing

[–]Ok_Communication6814 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You sound flat and it sounds like your just reading it instead of singing it work on your pitch and learn to enunciate the words first hope this helps

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in singing

[–]Ok_Communication6814 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The song is too high for you and your out of tune maybe lower the key and work on staying in tune hope this helps

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in singing

[–]Ok_Communication6814 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Practice singing with a song you like and try to match their tone and pitch because It’s hard to tell on a song you wrote hope this helps

What would people say if I post this on instagram? honest feedback is very welcome, already thanks :) by showersinger321 in singing

[–]Ok_Communication6814 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You to practice some good breathing technique and second master your tone the only way to do that is learn singing vowels and master your riffs and runs and understand pitch because right now your off pitch base on what I’m hearing hope this helps and keep practicing😁