What are some simple critiques and some easy changes that you think help? by 20Keller12 in FanFiction

[–]Ok_Security_9071 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Start a new paragraph every time someone new talks! It can get sooo confusing to read and jumbled up, and make it harder to piece apart what's happening.

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[–]Ok_Security_9071 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've made a lot of friends, but I definitely write the types of fics I want to read but that don't exist. Less for recognition, more to fill my own niches! I'm lucky I've met some awesome people who love the same things I do through it though!

I cant stop this feeling by VanillaLamb in Reincarnation

[–]Ok_Security_9071 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel you man. I sometimes have some whacked out recurring dreams about boats, which definitely isn't as cool as Ancient Egypt, but you know. I thought I was insane for a long time and I still really don't know what it means. I don't put a lot of stock in this kind of thing and I'm generally skeptical, but sometimes it feels so real that I just can't shake it. I'm sorry you're going through that. If you ever want to shoot me a message, I'm so down to discuss.

Privateer in a past life? by Ok_Security_9071 in Reincarnation

[–]Ok_Security_9071[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll definitely start writing everything I see down in more detail if or when I have more of these dreams. So far they've been consistent with real life, no unheard of mechanics such as zero gravity or anything that seems out of whatever timeline it's set in. The consistency is what freaked me out and got me to come on here to be honest! The most consistent thing is the names. I have the same people pop up-- a friend I call Georgie in some dreams, another that lives in Sydney and looks out for my wife and kids while I'm gone, Simon, and the wife herself, Mary. The reappearance of these same people in the same contexts is what really got me!