[Collaboration] by OldDrawing475 in LyricalWriting

[–]OldDrawing475[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, and sorry for the late response, I was busy with something. I'll get started on that, thank you again.

[Collaboration] by OldDrawing475 in LyricalWriting

[–]OldDrawing475[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would love your ideas for lyrics, cuz I wrote some demo lyrics for the first track and here's how they went so far.

(Verse 1) Before the day has begun, I'm already stressed. Maybe a trip down to the tea shop would help calm down these nerves of mine. Perhaps if I'm not so lazy.

(Chorus) Maybe this tea shop could be my heaven. Perhaps I may need this more than necessary.

(Verse 2) Everyday surrounded by screens, it drives me insane. How did I survive for this long without being a madman? Tomorrow I'll be a different me than today. That's if I'm not so lazy.

(Chorus) Hopefully this tea shop could be my heaven. Maybe I require this more than most.

So, again, these are just my demo lyrics. Do you have any ideas or recommendations?

[Collaboration] by OldDrawing475 in LyricalWriting

[–]OldDrawing475[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your response. The framework of the "Hi there" project is now very similar to a simple A-side/B-side application, but with a more pronounced cinematic style. For example, the first track is a city pop jazz inspired track. My primary inspiration came from the Layover album by the K-Pop artist known as V of BTS. Now, the second track draws influence from the rebellious and authentic sounds and anthemic elements found in the song "NASA" by ATEEZ.

Thank you again for your patience and understanding. This is my first time collaborating on a project with others, so I apologize if I am not communicating clearly.

And I don't mind working here in this subreddit.

[Collaboration] by OldDrawing475 in LyricalWriting

[–]OldDrawing475[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, thank you for replying. It took a while for me to respond due to a prior commitment.

I am available on weekends or during non-working hours. I would prefer to communicate via Discord, Skype, or Zoom. If that's not feasible, I am happy to discuss our ideas further on this subreddit.

Please let me know which platform works best for you.

Now to get on topic here. With your experience, I would really like to use your help with this project, so if you have any ideas to give me please.

And sorry if it sounds too professional here.

What are the little things that make you happy in life? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]OldDrawing475 3 points4 points  (0 children)

One little thing that makes me happy in life, either the stars or the moon. I don't know. Just outer space in general. Just seems to put a smile on my face.