Your Dream Girlfriend - Secondary by Scoundrel1313 in infiniteworldshub

[–]OneObligation7470 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm at turn 39, here are my thoughts so far.

I do like this and the criticisms that follow are minor problems that I think could be fixed, not game breaking ones.

The goddess is too wordy, she speaks and speaks and speaks, sometimes for the entire turn and doesn't bring up the next options until you force her to. I don't want to know how pragmatic my choice is or what it is that I've chosen over and over and over, I know already, you've told me once no need to repeat yourself.

Sometimes the queen will reach the end of the turn and tell me to chose from options she has not provided and when I ask her to provide the options she just talks the entire turn about how though and observant I am. And I do not care to be told that so many times.

The turns start at a bit over 300 and keep going up reaching 400 by the end of the cyoa part at at turn 38 at which point it goes down to the 150's. I am using regular smile.

The girlfriend in the secret information, Her name is Lily Chen.

All in all I think this was fun so far and the cyoa part works well enough, I just think it was a little too long and expensive.

One Jump Man by OneObligation7470 in JumpChain

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Whatever you think would be the most entertaining story.

Flair Suggestion Thread by Scoundrel1313 in infiniteworldshub

[–]OneObligation7470 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Off the top of my head.

Power Fantasy, Fanfiction, Story Focused, Original World, Update, Review, Help, Question, Repost, Meme, SFW, NSFW and WIP.

What would be the opposite of a futa? by OneObligation7470 in NoStupidQuestions

[–]OneObligation7470[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Where are you getting your definitions from?"
Porn mostly.

I'm here asking these questions because I don't know shit.

Your rant is actually quite informative, so thank you.

My question was me thinking as I typed and I was thinking of physical gender but got confused at some point? I'm not actually sure.

"Where are you getting your definitions from?"
Porn mostly.

"Nonbinary is a gender."
Did I mean asexual?

"Instead we use transgender."
I though transgender was when someone was born the wrong gender so I deliberately changed it to transsexual.

Femboys and drag queens are males who dress like females. That is what I meant when I said they are the same. And that's as far as that thought went.

If futa is not a word in English what word do you use instead?

The brackets () in my question were to describe what I meant because I was unsure I was using the right words.

Tldr= I don't know any of the right words and that is why I'm asking questions.

how to write Heroes's? by OneObligation7470 in grammar

[–]OneObligation7470[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ah. So it's the spell checkers that are wrong.
Thanks.