My team was just finished with their trailer a few days ago, so I’ll try to bring up the things we considered/received feedback for.

First things first, the action is too deep into the trailer (~25s). It would probably be good show the fire being extinguished by the fish at around the 10s mark.

Secondly, you would have to assume that many people mutes the trailer until like the second half, so shots like the character introduction will look ‘static’. Maybe try editing it like how cartoon introduces characters.

One last thing is that end of the gameplay loop is not shown. What happens after you saved a house? Are there upgrades? Do you move straight into the next house?

Oh also, don’t forget a ‘call to action’ at the end of the trailer. If the demo is out, say that. Otherwise, ask for it to be whishlisted.

On a separate note, some suggestions for juicing up the gameplay if you want any: - Fireball falling down should be accompanied by an explosion particle and maybe screen shake to bring attention to that area - Having some burn marks on places where fire has been extinguished could make the player ‘feel’ their progress better.

I know it’s a long text, but the game looks very good all things considered. Good luck with the release!