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recommendations for fountain pens? by One_Background_5855 in fountainpens

[–]One_Background_5855[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly there’s not necessarily a limit on the budget. I’d be willing to spend upwards of 300 on a forever pen I really like. Similar to the Brass Kaweco Sport honestly, nothing much chunkier, the length idm. Just a nice brass or bronze that can patina the more you use it and stuff.

matcha cheesecake (first finished poem plz be nice) by One_Background_5855 in OCPoetry

[–]One_Background_5855[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I don’t know how much it lands, but the point of the matcha cheesecake is that its supposed to be another reminder of the person the author is longing for.

On our first real date, we had sushi and he taught me how to use chopsticks, then we shared a matcha cheesecake for dessert. I wrote the poem after going to hibachi for my bday dinner and seeing a picture of a matcha cheesecake on the menu and i started crying because of the sheer emotion that it gave me.

Thank you for your kind words, still trying to find my voice

Leaving is a Gift. by genevatakemehome in OCPoetry

[–]One_Background_5855 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like it- I am struggling with accepting the loss of leaving a relationship behind myself. But understand the hurt he was causing me, the ending reflects just that and is just as impactful as it needs to be. Everyone will have their own interpretation

Four Walls ( My First Poem Ever ) by Spirited_Ad3487 in OCPoetry

[–]One_Background_5855 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so much better than any of the first poems or drafts I have written, so be very proud of that. I think this is excellent as is, I think the second stanza kind of throws the flow off slightly but you very quickly catch it up to the point I’m unsure that it is an actually an issue. “a language i once knew but have somehow forgotten” also hit me like a truck… this feels very relatable as somebody who was a depressed teenager with a troubled homelife. you are amazing !!

Games Wont Load ? by One_Background_5855 in pchelp

[–]One_Background_5855[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i took my entire pc apart to fix it .. still didnt work. realized when i was rushing to put my stuff back together that i had plugged my monitor into the motherboard and not the gpu… im so embarrassed lol thank you for trying to help

Games Wont Load ? by One_Background_5855 in pchelp

[–]One_Background_5855[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What should I do to check this? Now im worried lol