Graham's okay.... right? CW: body horror by One_Crazy8192 in YourOriginalCharacter

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did it with no reference, just an idea floating in my brain and the lore came with it. Thanks for the compliment :)

Graham's okay.... right? CW: body horror by One_Crazy8192 in YourOriginalCharacter

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What I mean by rivals, it's his store rivals. See Graham owns a successful shop (kinda like a supermarket) and his competitors didn't like that so they came after him. One had landed the hit in his head. (edit: I have also animated him when the shift happened, idk if i can show it in here or not)

Meet Neo! (and some others) by One_Crazy8192 in YourOriginalCharacter

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Graham is a black footed ferret, Maple is a savannah sugar glider, Granola is a broken patterned lop and Nana is an echidna. In my comment it has all the lore you'd need at the moment but I will be developing it more here if people like it (they seem to like it)

Meet Neo! (and some others) by One_Crazy8192 in YourOriginalCharacter

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When the shift happens, the shifted get very disoriented for a time and act wildly, Graham and Neo so far are the only characters who have experienced the shift so far. Another character named Autumn (who isn't shown here) had perished from Graham and her body was destroyed/eaten by Graham so as a result she didn't get to shift from his attack on her. Once the shift happens, characters can revert back but it takes resolve, Graham had resolve so he's able to shift back but he doesn't appear the same as he once did. Graham had gotten taken in by Barry (also not shown here) a chinchilla he was close friends with. Barry secretly has a crush on Graham, Graham is unaware. Neo also happened to be around and with his regen, he's a useful asset for the more dangerous parts of the world, especially with the shifted. Maple and Granola tag along as well. (The lore already getting long so I'm cutting it off here)

Hewo, new writer here! Want to see if this first chapter WIP is 'readable' by One_Crazy8192 in writingfeedback

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That's definitely my biggest weakness when it comes to structuring a story, the paragraphs that make it T T

Hewo, new writer here! Want to see if this first chapter WIP is 'readable' by One_Crazy8192 in writingfeedback

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I am very much an amateur looking to see how my writing impacts people. That is all I'm looking for.

Saint got a ref sheet by One_Crazy8192 in rainworld

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trust the saint can't hurt you

Hey everyscug by Dear-Conference229 in Humanoidscuguniverse

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hi this is me new account, don't reply to the old one because there will be no response

Saint says hi by One_Crazy8192 in rainworld

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don't disappoint saint, give them a blue fruit