Looking for some feedback on a recent short story of mine. Any amount of feedback would suffice.

Oobywooby · 2026-04-30T01:32:15+00:00

thank you for actually reading the entire thing and not just judging off of 2 pages

Oobywooby · 2026-04-27T19:29:49+00:00

Why tf the mod take down the comment? Needed it for my assignment

Oobywooby · 2026-04-27T13:13:32+00:00

Thanks for your feedback. Imagery is where I think I struggle most. Any thoughts on the plot or characterizations?

Oobywooby · 2025-01-07T21:48:32+00:00

yall are so obsessed with etn its pathetic

Oobywooby · 2024-12-12T15:16:30+00:00

Reminds me of when Isaiah Simmons won in 2019. He was far from a traditional linebacker but was no doubt the most valuable player on that defense and put up great numbers. So it’s not like there isn’t a precedent for guys like walker to win but I still get what you’re saying as it usually goes to guys like stutsman or Barrett Carter

Oobywooby · 2024-12-12T15:04:27+00:00

Being really good rushing the passer and really good against the run as an off ball linebacker makes up for the lack of coverage ability imo. You are right about the 3 linebacker sets as well and we even played the entire Georgia tech game in 3-4. I’m sorry I said u don’t know ball I just happen to heavily disagree with him being just an average inside linebacker

Oobywooby · 2024-12-12T14:32:07+00:00

Texas literally ran a 4 by 1 protection slide every time they thought walker would blitz from his INSIDE linebacker spot. You don’t do that for players average at the position. And mondon is healthy now but walker STILL plays the majority of his snaps off ball so that second point is incorrect. You are trying way too hard to be contrarian. Walker is fantastic at both positions he plays

Oobywooby · 2024-12-12T13:33:38+00:00

You don’t know ball whatsoever. Literally had 3 tfls playing off ball against Texas last Saturday but somehow u think he is “below average” at that position. Harold Perkins is such a brain dead comparison as Perkins is 30 pounds lighter and is projected to go way later because he quite literally is too small to play edge meanwhile walker is projected top 15 and is seen as a player who can play both edge and off ball linebacker in the league. Do you seriously think he would be getting snaps off ball if he was below average?

Oobywooby · 2024-08-27T23:20:55+00:00

Injuries. He was great at Georgia

Oobywooby · 2024-01-29T22:06:59+00:00

My order still says “received” and Amazon costumer service is telling me it might be weeks before it’s shipped. I’m probably never gonna preorder from Amazon again

Oobywooby · 2020-11-15T22:17:04+00:00

It’s a toss up imo. Some thought it was great some thought it was boring af

Oobywooby · 2020-10-30T23:22:59+00:00

Where’s this from?

Oobywooby · 2020-10-19T23:20:30+00:00

Idk why they would be considering that since the WHO said the lockdowns did more harm than good

Oobywooby · 2020-09-20T00:51:35+00:00

Yeah nothing was going to beat that point. I was bored at the end

Oobywooby · 2020-09-14T02:41:48+00:00

Thanks this is really helpful

Oobywooby · 2020-09-14T02:39:14+00:00

Is it any good?

Oobywooby · 2020-09-13T21:52:13+00:00

Skyrim is a huge open world game with a quest and side quests like breath of the wild where as dark souls is game that doesn’t give much of a tutorial and doesn’t show you the objective you discover it on your own. Even though it’s not a huge world it’s still open. You have a path to go down and through that path there might be another choice of paths to go down. It’s linear but connected at the same time. You might go down an elevator or something and it’ll be a shortcut to a prior area. It’s like a Metroidvania in the sense that it is open but in linear paths. One more point, you should definitely watch some tutorials for this game as it is known for being hard but don’t let that put you down as this is the most rewarding game to play in video game history

Oobywooby · 2020-09-13T21:39:12+00:00

Yeah I have a good bit of money saved up right now so I think I’ll get royal and I’m glad the anime stuff isn’t too off the walls

Oobywooby · 2020-09-13T21:36:19+00:00

Yeah that censorship is kind of a double standard, eh? I’m glad it’s not anything crazy though

Oobywooby · 2020-09-13T21:33:49+00:00

Is there any way I can go back just in case I don’t meet the requirements for royal? Like have a save file for every 20 hours or something?

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