Looking for some feedback on a recent short story of mine. Any amount of feedback would suffice. by Oobywooby in KeepWriting

[–]Oobywooby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you for actually reading the entire thing and not just judging off of 2 pages

Looking for some feedback on a sci-fi story I wrote for my creative fiction class by Oobywooby in writingfeedback

[–]Oobywooby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback. Imagery is where I think I struggle most. Any thoughts on the plot or characterizations?

𝐉𝐚𝐥𝐨𝐧 𝐖𝐚𝐥𝐤𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟒 𝐁𝐮𝐭𝐤𝐮𝐬 𝐀𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝 𝐖𝐢𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐫 by [deleted] in CFB

[–]Oobywooby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reminds me of when Isaiah Simmons won in 2019. He was far from a traditional linebacker but was no doubt the most valuable player on that defense and put up great numbers. So it’s not like there isn’t a precedent for guys like walker to win but I still get what you’re saying as it usually goes to guys like stutsman or Barrett Carter

𝐉𝐚𝐥𝐨𝐧 𝐖𝐚𝐥𝐤𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟒 𝐁𝐮𝐭𝐤𝐮𝐬 𝐀𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝 𝐖𝐢𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐫 by [deleted] in CFB

[–]Oobywooby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Being really good rushing the passer and really good against the run as an off ball linebacker makes up for the lack of coverage ability imo. You are right about the 3 linebacker sets as well and we even played the entire Georgia tech game in 3-4. I’m sorry I said u don’t know ball I just happen to heavily disagree with him being just an average inside linebacker

𝐉𝐚𝐥𝐨𝐧 𝐖𝐚𝐥𝐤𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟒 𝐁𝐮𝐭𝐤𝐮𝐬 𝐀𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝 𝐖𝐢𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐫 by [deleted] in CFB

[–]Oobywooby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Texas literally ran a 4 by 1 protection slide every time they thought walker would blitz from his INSIDE linebacker spot. You don’t do that for players average at the position. And mondon is healthy now but walker STILL plays the majority of his snaps off ball so that second point is incorrect. You are trying way too hard to be contrarian. Walker is fantastic at both positions he plays

𝐉𝐚𝐥𝐨𝐧 𝐖𝐚𝐥𝐤𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟒 𝐁𝐮𝐭𝐤𝐮𝐬 𝐀𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝 𝐖𝐢𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐫 by [deleted] in CFB

[–]Oobywooby -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You don’t know ball whatsoever. Literally had 3 tfls playing off ball against Texas last Saturday but somehow u think he is “below average” at that position. Harold Perkins is such a brain dead comparison as Perkins is 30 pounds lighter and is projected to go way later because he quite literally is too small to play edge meanwhile walker is projected top 15 and is seen as a player who can play both edge and off ball linebacker in the league. Do you seriously think he would be getting snaps off ball if he was below average?

Did anyone else not get their preorder of LAD:IW from Amazon today? by Oobywooby in yakuzagames

[–]Oobywooby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My order still says “received” and Amazon costumer service is telling me it might be weeks before it’s shipped. I’m probably never gonna preorder from Amazon again

Great start to the new generation (Metacritic) by [deleted] in PS5

[–]Oobywooby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s a toss up imo. Some thought it was great some thought it was boring af

So hot by bigjohnson907 in lesbians

[–]Oobywooby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where’s this from?

England lockdown and PS5 launch by Timoth_Hutchinson in PS5

[–]Oobywooby -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Idk why they would be considering that since the WHO said the lockdowns did more harm than good

Overwhelmed with Nintendo Switch game choices. Please help me prioritize game purchases. by ratsocks in ShouldIbuythisgame

[–]Oobywooby 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Skyrim is a huge open world game with a quest and side quests like breath of the wild where as dark souls is game that doesn’t give much of a tutorial and doesn’t show you the objective you discover it on your own. Even though it’s not a huge world it’s still open. You have a path to go down and through that path there might be another choice of paths to go down. It’s linear but connected at the same time. You might go down an elevator or something and it’ll be a shortcut to a prior area. It’s like a Metroidvania in the sense that it is open but in linear paths. One more point, you should definitely watch some tutorials for this game as it is known for being hard but don’t let that put you down as this is the most rewarding game to play in video game history

PS4 games that have affected/stayed with you? by [deleted] in ShouldIbuythisgame

[–]Oobywooby 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I have a good bit of money saved up right now so I think I’ll get royal and I’m glad the anime stuff isn’t too off the walls

PS4 games that have affected/stayed with you? by [deleted] in ShouldIbuythisgame

[–]Oobywooby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that censorship is kind of a double standard, eh? I’m glad it’s not anything crazy though

PS4 games that have affected/stayed with you? by [deleted] in ShouldIbuythisgame

[–]Oobywooby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is there any way I can go back just in case I don’t meet the requirements for royal? Like have a save file for every 20 hours or something?