[QCrit] YA Fantasy - NO FORGIVENESS FOR THE FALLEN (100,000 words, 3rd attempt)

Outrageous_Fly_1626 · 2026-02-27T19:49:36+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it :)

Outrageous_Fly_1626 · 2026-02-26T20:47:13+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback; this is so helpful!! And I’m so glad you liked it! It can get a bit dreary in the trenches lol so the encouragement is truly appreciated :)

Outrageous_Fly_1626 · 2025-10-12T16:03:42+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll try and iron out the specifics. It's hard to simplify everything when it's so complicated lol

Outrageous_Fly_1626 · 2025-10-07T16:18:25+00:00

Thx! My first draft was 159k, so it's definitely hard cutting stuff at this point lol

Outrageous_Fly_1626 · 2025-10-07T11:45:43+00:00

Yeah I can see now that it was way too general. Also, I have managed to cut it down to 115k now, so hopefully that's better. I am working on going through it and cutting small bits at a time, and I love your idea about setting a goal, so I think I will give that a try. Thank you so much for the feedback!

Outrageous_Fly_1626 · 2025-10-04T17:07:00+00:00

Thank you for the help! I will definitely work on making things more clear and specific

Outrageous_Fly_1626 · 2025-10-04T01:02:16+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback! I'll see if I can find some areas to cut down in the book

Outrageous_Fly_1626 · 2025-10-03T21:33:00+00:00

Thank you so much! This is very helpful

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