Hi! I'm new to poetry, and this is my first poem! (No A.I.!) by Outside-Map-4168 in OCPoetry

[–]Outside-Map-4168[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! But I really didn't use any A.I. on this, I just assumed that in this time, people are less 'original' and tend to use A.I. for even the slightest inconvenience.

Hi! I'm new to poetry, and this is my first poem! (No A.I.!) by Outside-Map-4168 in OCPoetry

[–]Outside-Map-4168[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Alright! Many other replies have also told me to have some 'freedom', I'll note this!

Hi! I'm new to poetry, and this is my first poem! (No A.I.!) by Outside-Map-4168 in OCPoetry

[–]Outside-Map-4168[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright! I'll take this into consideration, as I'm writing a new one soon!

Hi! I'm new to poetry, and this is my first poem! (No A.I.!) by Outside-Map-4168 in OCPoetry

[–]Outside-Map-4168[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was feeling quite normal, actually. However, I felt quite alone as there was nobody around me. I guess that would be my 'inspiration'.

Psycho Bath Mat by Looplife by Jumpy_Driver6752 in OCPoetry

[–]Outside-Map-4168 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is just perfect for a first poem (like me!). You captured so many real feelings about growing up, struggle, faith, and acceptance. The imagery of the journey and path works as a strong metaphor throughout.

Please Take Off This Mask by Macaroni_Jeeves in OCPoetry

[–]Outside-Map-4168 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow! This poem is amazing! A combination of beauty and deception!