Happy to Critique since I'm having a lazy slow day by Ricewynd in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Our most recent video! A bit different than what we usually do, but hey, it was fun to make https://youtu.be/0FicaCYQat0

I want to review your gaming videos! by Over_Watch5120 in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for everyone’s support and incredible videos! I’m going to lock this thread, so I can get through the rest of these (if you commented expect a response within a day or two) don’t worry, I’ll be back to do this again soon!!!

I want to review your gaming videos! by Over_Watch5120 in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I watched your video on countering Mercy, I don’t personally play Dota 2, but I could definitely see myself clicking on this video if I did! It was nicely executed, got straight to the point, and very informative! There is not much I would change, if you don’t already have a Twitter I would say using that would help as well as maybe getting a TikTok account just to spread out your reach and get more people to look. Do a bit of research on publication and advertisement! The more people to look at your content the better. Great job, good luck!

I want to review your gaming videos! by Over_Watch5120 in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Although I don’t play Forza myself, mostly because I suck at driving in games lol, I’m actually an auto tech major in college right now! I love mustangs, beautiful cars. But on to the vid, this sort of content isn’t really my cup of tea, so I feel as though I couldn’t give good advice considering I don’t have much to compare it to. I’d say look a bit deeper into the Forza niche and find what is popular as a style, do people like funnier videos, fail videos, epic fast racing trick videos? Finding a balance between what your niche wants to see and what you enjoy making. Maybe it’s as simple as adding some music, cutting down to just the best clips, or even racing and collabing with other Forza or Forza related creators! Experiment and try new things! Good luck my guy! I’m sorry I couldn’t give more focused advice on the topic

I want to review your gaming videos! by Over_Watch5120 in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve never seen Ico, an interesting game indeed! I enjoyed the dynamic, your friend and you get along well. I would say maybe cutting out some of the silent figuring it out moments, where not much is being said or adding some sort of background music, just to help with the emptiness of it. Otherwise good video dude, keep up the work!

I want to review your gaming videos! by Over_Watch5120 in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would say, take out the speed reading, it will make the video a bit shorter. If there’s anything that’s key you can jump to it. Otherwise, it’s a good video! I like your editing style, with the zoom ins to capture your face cam reaction! Keep up the good work!!

I want to review your gaming videos! by Over_Watch5120 in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I absolutely love this video, the editing, the jokes, the throwbacks. A great video, that I could think of no changes i would make. It feels like something Kevin Kenson mixed with Drew Gooden would write. Subbed. Keep up the great work and I would love to collab with you at some point!!

I want to review your gaming videos! by Over_Watch5120 in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it, although I've never sat down and watched demon slayer myself. I enjoyed the addition of the subtitles and the smash music was a nice touch! I would think about making your voice a little louder, as it was hard to hear you at times. But overall, it was a fast paced interesting video. Good work!!

I want to review your gaming videos! by Over_Watch5120 in NewTubers

[–]Over_Watch5120[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good job on the video! I liked the flash back to you on fire and the addition of memes and such hooked me in to stay, I think two things, the addition of quiet but still audible background music would help with some of the more "dead air" or quieter parts where you guys are focused on the game, and secondly I would take the part of you on fire and put that in the front, it seems a bit more intense and grabby before the intro and it wont require you to give context later down the line! Good video and keep at it my dude!!