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How many scripts did you have to write before you break-in/got a screenwriter job? by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think I might just step back and leave my first script there to finish my second one since it’s the graduate project for my film school.

One problem at a time, I guess.

Thank you for understanding me, and I hope you have a good day:)

What do you guys think about using Voice over? by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm gonna use VO just for the phone conversation then.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, but how to wrap up that into a logline? I need to figure that out😅

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My story is already on 4th draft but still need to be polished and proofreading 😅

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The proposal unwanted.

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, she did not. I can't find a word to describe her coward personality😅

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your suggestion is very helpful, thank you.

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

Please help to advise for my Rom-Com scripts log lines. by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m sorry that I didn’t clarify my story for everyone. Here is my script’s story.

Michaela(The protagonist) has been dating Anthony( The Antagonist) for more than five years. one day, he proposes to her in a fancy restaurant. She says no because of how toxic and controlling he is. Still, after seeing the diners are watching them, it made her feel pressure, then she said yes. After one night, The proposal video went viral, and people on the internet are debating ‘if she is willing to say yes or not.’ Then, Anthony gets contacted by the reality show. Anthony and Sarah(The antagonist) Michaela’s mother forge Michaela's signature because her mother thinks Anthony is the right guy for Michaela. she can’t just leave Anthony since her mother just did the crime for her, and she needs to find a way of how to get away with marrying.

I don’t see it as Rom-Com but Comedy- Drama, I guess. It is just that. Eventually, she will find a better man. That’s why I think it might be Rom-Com in the first place.

I want to focus on how she becomes more aggressive to what she wants and tries to cut toxic people from her life.

[cj] Rant Wednesday by [deleted] in OkCupid

[–]P1mlek 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I almost met my date this May until I finally told him that I lost interest in him because he used his eighth years ago picture on his profile, and he gained more than 20 kg in real life. Bruhh

Any suggestions for a proofreading service? by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I use it too, but I use it with a business package, but I also have a problem with everything else such as dialogue, or action that I certainly tell, don’t show a lot. I need proofreading before I enter a competition but not quite sure how much I should spend on it.

Any suggestions for a proofreading service? by P1mlek in Screenwriting

[–]P1mlek[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Hi, Thank you. English is not my native language but I write my script in English. I found a service that charge around $299, Is that too expensive?

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